To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Drawing on Walls"Poems by Michael
18 total reviews
Comment from amada
This is a very deep and touching poem, deep expressions of wonder on the life of an enchanting metamorphic rock. And then, there is a Tango in the Night in the background. All is right, dearest friend!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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This is a very deep and touching poem, deep expressions of wonder on the life of an enchanting metamorphic rock. And then, there is a Tango in the Night in the background. All is right, dearest friend!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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ha...Hi...-smile-
yea...I didn't know half them words until I started checking into "mother of pearl"...ah haha...thank you Sweetheart. love Michael
Comment from strandregs
There once was a girl called pearl
whose bottom would tumble and twirl
young old men took snaps
with cutting edge apps
and sheepishly asked for a curl.
igh George
I have been conspired to peep at your work. And what happened?
I was inspired started writing your review and ended up posting it.
so here it is
What a mess.
anyway its only half
youll have to go to my page im not pasting any more.
liked your poem I like that style of swirling clouds that bring uou down to the pearl.:-)) Z.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016
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There once was a girl called pearl
whose bottom would tumble and twirl
young old men took snaps
with cutting edge apps
and sheepishly asked for a curl.
igh George
I have been conspired to peep at your work. And what happened?
I was inspired started writing your review and ended up posting it.
so here it is
What a mess.
anyway its only half
youll have to go to my page im not pasting any more.
liked your poem I like that style of swirling clouds that bring uou down to the pearl.:-)) Z.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016
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ha.....well I'm known for inspiring. I gotta an extra spark-plug....theres all kinds of useful shit under the hood...ahhaha....love to you ...michael
Comment from Hayley Solomon
This is lovely. Have to admit I don't understand all of it, but the impressions are striking, the overall piece fluid, metaphoric and alliterative, so five stars it is1
Well done! I particularly enjoyed stanza 2.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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This is lovely. Have to admit I don't understand all of it, but the impressions are striking, the overall piece fluid, metaphoric and alliterative, so five stars it is1
Well done! I particularly enjoyed stanza 2.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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I love your name...-smile-
I want one...-wink-....thank you Harley. Hey you aught to meet Marlboro man...we'll going riding or something....haha...love to you...Michael
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Haha! But my name is Hayley nor Harley, sadly!!
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ah well...will work it out...all I gots a bike with banana seat right now...hop on , let's paint the town red...-smile- haha
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:)
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pleased to meet you Hayley Solomon...you know I read about your Dad...-smile-
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Haha! But my name is Hayley nor Harley, sadly!!
Comment from royowen
I immediately thought of "we look through a glass darkly".i guess we neither know ourselves completely, we know ourselves but superficially, and of course we tend to depend on our perception, which is decidedly corrupt anyway. Well done, Michael I keep trying to look through your eyes, but darkly, but some great imagery, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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I immediately thought of "we look through a glass darkly".i guess we neither know ourselves completely, we know ourselves but superficially, and of course we tend to depend on our perception, which is decidedly corrupt anyway. Well done, Michael I keep trying to look through your eyes, but darkly, but some great imagery, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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ah Roy...if you knew what torture does to a man...you'd know it is miraculous that you even read me at all. Dont think I havent seen the Son shine or seen His antagonist seem to win. I am not Him, fragile in comparison....but just as strong as my enemy. love to you...michael
Comment from create4christ
I really like your GIF and your song. Mother of Pearl is one of my favorite stones. I actually design jewelry around them. I like your poem that describes this stone nicely. Great job.
Thank you for sharing...Penny
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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I really like your GIF and your song. Mother of Pearl is one of my favorite stones. I actually design jewelry around them. I like your poem that describes this stone nicely. Great job.
Thank you for sharing...Penny
Comment Written 28-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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ha....so cool...so you do understand..ha....remarkable...lol...ah yea I gave myself a quick lesson the other day....and was fasinated....-smile-...thank you....love michael
Comment from Ronni
HELLO Michael,
Quite a profound contrast and convergence in your musing here, In your
fathomless depths of exploration and expression. Does indeed give clue
to your inner smile, a trait no one else succeeds at so well. Unravelling
life, mortal and inanimate, one mystery to another, conveying serious
juxtaposition, totally unveiling all in your ever clever and incomparable
creativity and ingenuity. Beguiling song choice adds more dramatic touch.
Thanks for sharing....in luv's smiles always, Ronni
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016
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HELLO Michael,
Quite a profound contrast and convergence in your musing here, In your
fathomless depths of exploration and expression. Does indeed give clue
to your inner smile, a trait no one else succeeds at so well. Unravelling
life, mortal and inanimate, one mystery to another, conveying serious
juxtaposition, totally unveiling all in your ever clever and incomparable
creativity and ingenuity. Beguiling song choice adds more dramatic touch.
Thanks for sharing....in luv's smiles always, Ronni
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016
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Deep inside I believe you mean that.
remembered you will always remain there.
Appreciate this Wonderful...-smile-...always love Michael
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You're right!
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You're right!
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Thanks Cheif...I thought so too
Comment from robina1978
Nice photos that complement your poem very well. It is a free verse where I liked the first and last stanza best, as usual. Drawings on the wall, mother of pearl and the music box.
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Nice photos that complement your poem very well. It is a free verse where I liked the first and last stanza best, as usual. Drawings on the wall, mother of pearl and the music box.
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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smile-...Sister. Why thank you I'm happy you approve.
yes indeed my verse is free....Hope and love to you....Michael
Comment from Nika2016
A poem that reflects the author's state of mind...opaline and iredescent...with words which foreshadow the music box poem in its lines. Always interesting even when reader has no clue of meaning. Fleetwood Mac? This does not sound like Stevie...
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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A poem that reflects the author's state of mind...opaline and iredescent...with words which foreshadow the music box poem in its lines. Always interesting even when reader has no clue of meaning. Fleetwood Mac? This does not sound like Stevie...
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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-headscratch-....is not obvious to you by now I dont want to play. Why do you promise to go away and lie through your goblin mouth. Maam......you need help okay....It is my honest review...please take it with you....goodbye-
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Whatever Dude....
Lets hope all remain safe ....for everyone's sake.
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thats exactly right dude...keep practicing...-wink-
