To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Exotic "Poems by Michael
47 total reviews
Comment from Dustybones
You have your own sense of movement with the way you have written this sharp distinct poem that grabs the dance along with the music. dustybones
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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You have your own sense of movement with the way you have written this sharp distinct poem that grabs the dance along with the music. dustybones
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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Hey Dusty...-smile-
thank you Hombre appreciate it...love to you Michael
Comment from Ricky1024
Control over water rights...
Rebirth wants second chance at the MASTER DANCE?
YESTERDAY TODAY...
Fading ...
Again...
WONDER WHEN?
SUICIDE ...
My Only option to hide?
Ricky
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Control over water rights...
Rebirth wants second chance at the MASTER DANCE?
YESTERDAY TODAY...
Fading ...
Again...
WONDER WHEN?
SUICIDE ...
My Only option to hide?
Ricky
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Hey Rick...-smile-
sorry I'm late...appreciate you Bro. love Michael
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"The Smile?
By Ricky1024 and Jason
The smile...
Oh how I?need...
?Yes indeed...
"BUY?
YOU SEE?
LOST THAT BACK IN 2003.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Somehow, Michael, you always manage to pull it off, in spite of the jumbled thoughts I find expressed within these exquisite phrases and metaphors. Maybe it's me, but this obsession seems fraught with danger for you and/or your protagonist...LOL
One nit - "tango(')s" - needs the apostrophe for possession, yes?
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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Somehow, Michael, you always manage to pull it off, in spite of the jumbled thoughts I find expressed within these exquisite phrases and metaphors. Maybe it's me, but this obsession seems fraught with danger for you and/or your protagonist...LOL
One nit - "tango(')s" - needs the apostrophe for possession, yes?
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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Well I got a knack for certain.....and apparently a magnent placed in me by evil doers...for bad luck. -smile-.......I'm michael....love to you Dawn-
Comment from write hand blue
An imaginative poem, with a well thought out word flow.
Most creative and expressive. A visual write and in my opinion a good poem... ~Mel~
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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An imaginative poem, with a well thought out word flow.
Most creative and expressive. A visual write and in my opinion a good poem... ~Mel~
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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Thanks Mel...much appreciated. love to you Michael
Comment from djsaxon
You are ridiculously talented. Loved everything about this. I suspect that you don't have too many corn-fed mamas in your fan base. You are a painter still, of all things challenging and beautiful.
hugs - DJ
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You are ridiculously talented. Loved everything about this. I suspect that you don't have too many corn-fed mamas in your fan base. You are a painter still, of all things challenging and beautiful.
hugs - DJ
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
Comment from Nika2016
It popped up for review. This is a serious response based on lines of poem:
Same ol' unusual liaison? Is she reading? Does she know she is the object of your...obsession? If not , will this liaison remain a wish? Solve me? She is goddess? You are a woman ? Transgender?
Mind control? Why on Earth would you want to?
The whole tango/oasis thing is a beautiful scenario. Personally, I think the music box ballerina should have been promoted to Page One. As your poems are usually good, what a difference payment makes in moving the masses. What does that say about the quality of poetry? Just a thought. I am not J.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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It popped up for review. This is a serious response based on lines of poem:
Same ol' unusual liaison? Is she reading? Does she know she is the object of your...obsession? If not , will this liaison remain a wish? Solve me? She is goddess? You are a woman ? Transgender?
Mind control? Why on Earth would you want to?
The whole tango/oasis thing is a beautiful scenario. Personally, I think the music box ballerina should have been promoted to Page One. As your poems are usually good, what a difference payment makes in moving the masses. What does that say about the quality of poetry? Just a thought. I am not J.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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look....your psychic right...?
what would you need my help for...?
put each index finger on each temple of your dome....press firmly and concentrate. I'm confident it will come to you...-headnod-
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Psychic? Where did you read that?
I don't want to go there....
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If you want to talk psychic...I see many of both genders but primarily one....not using any pdychic eyes. Like I said...
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Psychic...stupid phone..
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hmm....could you do me a favor...? keep you;re tarot card reading to yourself. thanks...
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Sure...but not reading cards...bye
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Interesting metaphors and great lines. Your thoughts are expressed well. Thanks for sharing this piece
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
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Interesting metaphors and great lines. Your thoughts are expressed well. Thanks for sharing this piece
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
Comment from Cogitator
You should know that I never give fewer than five stars when I review. This kind of post indicates many conflicting thoughts and emotions, but also indicates a fervent desire to express inner feelings. That's the reason I am responding. Here's my take: you are intelligent, but virtually unaware of emotion as your balancing factor. As of now, you are a victim of societal programming. If you deny this, you will wallow in ignorance and pain...John
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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You should know that I never give fewer than five stars when I review. This kind of post indicates many conflicting thoughts and emotions, but also indicates a fervent desire to express inner feelings. That's the reason I am responding. Here's my take: you are intelligent, but virtually unaware of emotion as your balancing factor. As of now, you are a victim of societal programming. If you deny this, you will wallow in ignorance and pain...John
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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I dont go for all that horoscope ESP crap John.
but I can tell you, you shouldn't repeat your interpretations quite so out loud so to speak, the "white coats" are everywhere.... listening. Alright, Buddy brush your teeth before ya hit the sack. love to you...Michael
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What a ridiculous way to respond. It is obvious that you have not yet experienced life...
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hmm...well, why dont you write about it...like me. -smile-
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I have
Comment from poetsteve15
what a day for six stars I am sure glad I saved some for the end of mouth.
outstanding art work and music to go with it. You made it total package deal.
a great job keep it up.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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what a day for six stars I am sure glad I saved some for the end of mouth.
outstanding art work and music to go with it. You made it total package deal.
a great job keep it up.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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well I appreciate the salute...-smile-
I was happy with its read. thanks again. love to you... michael
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Your very welcome GB
Comment from Leineco
this tangos inflamed crescendo - for that phrase alone
I am seduced by this poem!!! (though I must admit same ol'
unusual liaison seduces plays a heck of a supporting role)
Interestingly, the first time I read that line - I saw "same ol' usual
liaison seduces" - which, as it turns out, I kinda, sorta like better
(or at least alternatively). :-)
Why is it, despite jumbled up grammar, imagery and phrasing, your
unique style always makes an impression - and often captivates me?
Considering my propensity for logic and syntax, it shouldn't. . . and
yet, your innuendo and implication seems to weave some sort of
voodoo spell!!!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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this tangos inflamed crescendo - for that phrase alone
I am seduced by this poem!!! (though I must admit same ol'
unusual liaison seduces plays a heck of a supporting role)
Interestingly, the first time I read that line - I saw "same ol' usual
liaison seduces" - which, as it turns out, I kinda, sorta like better
(or at least alternatively). :-)
Why is it, despite jumbled up grammar, imagery and phrasing, your
unique style always makes an impression - and often captivates me?
Considering my propensity for logic and syntax, it shouldn't. . . and
yet, your innuendo and implication seems to weave some sort of
voodoo spell!!!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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-smile-....well if I've impressed you, I've impressed the best. you are consistently special. so I am of course thrilled to hear that.
ah lats see....it could mean several things to many people...to me, while creating it....it was a soul remembering in the quiet of one evening....another never ever forgotten...nor matched. its about the tango...both dance and human romance....crashing into one moment eternal....-smile-...ah thank you Special. love to you ...michael
