To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Eye Piece"Poems by Michael
23 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
I just popped in to read your POM nominated poem, and to say congratulations. You are a popular and well-loved poet on site. I can't claim to understand free verse, but I'd say you do it with classy style. Best wishes in the voting booth. I'm sure you'll do well.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
  |
I just popped in to read your POM nominated poem, and to say congratulations. You are a popular and well-loved poet on site. I can't claim to understand free verse, but I'd say you do it with classy style. Best wishes in the voting booth. I'm sure you'll do well.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
-
Hi Joy...-smile-
I am...huh...ya know I always thought so...ahaha...well thank you. oh yes yes...I get any more trophies....I dont know where I'll put em'....haha...love to you...Michael
Comment from RGstar
I returned at the right time.
Some of these lines here are magnificent, my brother. How glad I am to see your name again, and I hail the committee for finding you with this, for if one takes the time to unlock your cryptic, no punctuation, style, then one swoons, for it is tragic, beautiful, imagery full and nostalgic all in one breath.
Keep striving, my friend, your place within this line up tells authors, what a good writer you are, it does not need to tell me for I have know long.
Six stars for sure.
My best wishes, Michael.
RG
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
 |
I returned at the right time.
Some of these lines here are magnificent, my brother. How glad I am to see your name again, and I hail the committee for finding you with this, for if one takes the time to unlock your cryptic, no punctuation, style, then one swoons, for it is tragic, beautiful, imagery full and nostalgic all in one breath.
Keep striving, my friend, your place within this line up tells authors, what a good writer you are, it does not need to tell me for I have know long.
Six stars for sure.
My best wishes, Michael.
RG
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
-
Hey Bro...-smile-
thank you Sir....yea pleasant surprise.
ha...well that you think so confirms me. Always love Bro....Michael
Comment from fionageorge
A wonderful and well constructed free verse poem. The words flow freely down the page and create a picture in the readers' mind. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
|
A wonderful and well constructed free verse poem. The words flow freely down the page and create a picture in the readers' mind. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
-
Thank you so much...-smile-
happy you enjoyed. love to you Michal
Comment from Ricky1024
"Eye Piece"
"Eye Piece breathes Life back into the Soul of one so lost...
"As if a Wave...
"Rises aimlessly at sea...
"The palms sway and the breeze breathes the very, last, breath, into the Soul of Mankinnd?"
"Perhaps, if we all could be the Palms...
"And, Our Sorrowed Lives the Breeze...
Ricky...
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
|
"Eye Piece"
"Eye Piece breathes Life back into the Soul of one so lost...
"As if a Wave...
"Rises aimlessly at sea...
"The palms sway and the breeze breathes the very, last, breath, into the Soul of Mankinnd?"
"Perhaps, if we all could be the Palms...
"And, Our Sorrowed Lives the Breeze...
Ricky...
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
-
Whats up Rick...-smile-
thanks man...hope you're alright Bro....love to you Michael
Comment from djsaxon
You are the absolute prince of the economic, and enigmatic image. I won't even attempt to go line for line. You know how I feel about your extraordinary quill. Your ranking is some sort of cosmic joke.
"something sad draws shade from sunshine." Gorgeous line.
love ya - DJ
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
|
You are the absolute prince of the economic, and enigmatic image. I won't even attempt to go line for line. You know how I feel about your extraordinary quill. Your ranking is some sort of cosmic joke.
"something sad draws shade from sunshine." Gorgeous line.
love ya - DJ
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
-
ha....yea, that's absolutely evident. Appreciate you DJ.....very happy you're back. love to you ...michael
Comment from Joan E.
Forgive my late response--I've been desperately trying to catch up since my travels. I especially liked your "life preserver" metaphor and "twin sibling" reference, plus the repeat of the inverted first stanza. Evocative and a half! Big hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
|
Forgive my late response--I've been desperately trying to catch up since my travels. I especially liked your "life preserver" metaphor and "twin sibling" reference, plus the repeat of the inverted first stanza. Evocative and a half! Big hugs- Joan
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
-
Joan...if you leave me now...you'll take away my only trusted Friend-Fan.....not to mention the biggest part of me. I borrowed most of that from Chicago. As you know I was orphaned there as a child...Mom said she was getting some "smokes" and then the story started....crying. Please dont go!...-smile- love to you...michael
-
Thank you for holding me in such high regard. I'm not planning to leave--I just get behind sometimes. Your "trusted Friend-Fan--it takes one to know one! Joan
Comment from amada
I really like the alliterations in the first line, very well done, it calls the attention's reader...this poet knows his poetry, there, I said it. A pleasure to read your work, dear friend.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
|
I really like the alliterations in the first line, very well done, it calls the attention's reader...this poet knows his poetry, there, I said it. A pleasure to read your work, dear friend.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
-
Hi Happy....smile....thank you Sweetheart.....I read yours ....it's outstanding.....I'll be buy later. Love to you michael
Comment from l.raven
Hi Michael, sad times with maybe a touch of hope...I hope...you truly do have a gift for writing Michael...smile...you know I love your words sweetie...and your picture....stunning...have a good day...Love you Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
|
Hi Michael, sad times with maybe a touch of hope...I hope...you truly do have a gift for writing Michael...smile...you know I love your words sweetie...and your picture....stunning...have a good day...Love you Linda xxoo
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
-
Well actually I just wrote a poem....but it snowballed as so much does these cold as hell days....Hey Linda....-smile-......thanks Sweetheat...hey listen if happen to run across your friend the other Linda....you tell her no thanks necissary...I'm a dudley for do right....love to you Michael
-
Michael, calm down...you were right in all that you said...and I also told her she was wrong...but I also told her there were a lot of talented people on this site...and that meant you...you...to read them...and not be accusing...I may not say things like you...but I know when something isn't right...and Dean was way out of bounds as well...get some sleep...xxoo love you too...Linda
-
me...? I'm a valium...-smile- who doesn't "record" IPI address of fellow members. or "monitor their continued criminal dealings"....I'm pretty sure I'm harmless compared to some of the sheriff's around here...-headtilt-
-
I'm not saying that wasn't crazy...that was beyond...seriously nuts...who does that stuff...who says that kind of stuff...criminal dealings...stay away from them or you'll go down with them...I agree with you...so don't headtilt at me...headtilt
Comment from dragonpoet
This sounds like a crisis of faith that is averted just to find another one. It sounds too circular, no hope. Or it can be a fight with clinical depression.
Sinks me ocean does not seem correct. Seems words are missing to claify meaning. Like, in an ocean.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
 |
This sounds like a crisis of faith that is averted just to find another one. It sounds too circular, no hope. Or it can be a fight with clinical depression.
Sinks me ocean does not seem correct. Seems words are missing to claify meaning. Like, in an ocean.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
-
yes....or "have a heart"...its silly isn't it...?...thanks -smile-
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A well-written poem. The eyes is the window to the soul. A smile around the mouth sometimes can't hide the shadows and pain visible in the eyes.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
|
A well-written poem. The eyes is the window to the soul. A smile around the mouth sometimes can't hide the shadows and pain visible in the eyes.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
-
Hi Sandra...-smile-
thank you....appreciate the thumbs up....love to you...michael
