Christine's Poems
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Comment from Dean Kuch
I wonder if our feline friend's
an alley or a stray?
Just slinking round and looking for
a mate with whom to play. ... Nope. She ain't mate searchin', that's for certain. She has a husband, her soul mate, whom she loves very deeply ...
Or is she just a Cheshire cat
who keeps us in a spin?
While lapping up the lovely cream
she'll wear a secret grin. ... Now THIS assessment I'd be more apt to agree with ...
Your poem is well rhymed, wonderfully well presented, and a nice ode to I Am Cat.
Best of luck to you in the contest ...
~Dean
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
I wonder if our feline friend's
an alley or a stray?
Just slinking round and looking for
a mate with whom to play. ... Nope. She ain't mate searchin', that's for certain. She has a husband, her soul mate, whom she loves very deeply ...
Or is she just a Cheshire cat
who keeps us in a spin?
While lapping up the lovely cream
she'll wear a secret grin. ... Now THIS assessment I'd be more apt to agree with ...
Your poem is well rhymed, wonderfully well presented, and a nice ode to I Am Cat.
Best of luck to you in the contest ...
~Dean
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi Dean, thanks for your review I didn 't mean she was searching for another man, instead a poet mate to get into mischief with LOL Thanks for reading my Cat poem and I am pleased you like my tribute to her and yes plenty of cream Ha Ha
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I knew what you meant, LOL.
You're very welcome.
~Dean
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Ha ha Just wanted to make sure
Comment from Liberty Justice
Hi love your photo plays key part in Poem. Poem flows with musical rhythm and joy. You just received thumbs up that put you 1st place tie. Congrats! Check out mine also. Good luck contests. liberty justice
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
Hi love your photo plays key part in Poem. Poem flows with musical rhythm and joy. You just received thumbs up that put you 1st place tie. Congrats! Check out mine also. Good luck contests. liberty justice
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi Liberty Justice. Thank you very much for your great support for my Cat poem and there is a contest to be held all great tributes, so any one could win. still what fun to have a go and I'm sure she will be purrrrrrring Cheers and good luck to you also Christine😃
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Hi check out my
writings today dear friend.
Good luck contests today.
liberty justice
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I am Cat's friend and I think you did a great job writing this poem for her, or in her honor. Whoever had the idea for this contest is a genius. Cat is such a wonderful person.
I like your entry. It is beautifully presented, it flows well, and has an excellent structure. I particularly like this.... Or is she just a Cheshire cat who keeps us in a spin? While lapping up the lovely cream? ......LOL awesome!
Good job!
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
I am Cat's friend and I think you did a great job writing this poem for her, or in her honor. Whoever had the idea for this contest is a genius. Cat is such a wonderful person.
I like your entry. It is beautifully presented, it flows well, and has an excellent structure. I particularly like this.... Or is she just a Cheshire cat who keeps us in a spin? While lapping up the lovely cream? ......LOL awesome!
Good job!
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi Gypsy, Many thanks for your review and lovely words. I am so pleased you found this a worthy entry and who could resist this contest after all there is only one Cat and what a kitty. Ha Ha I am sure she will be lapping all this up LOL . I enjoyed writing this and appreciate all the support.
Comment from I am Cat
Well, I sound AWESOME! I love that this is written in one of my favorite forms... iambic tetrameter/trimeter! Just like I write the Matilda series... Awesomely and perfectly penned, it just lilts along wonderfully... you stole my heart with this...
Thank you so much for saying such sweet things, and I can't wait to find out who wrote this... the term, 'one off' gives me a hint... only one other person has said that to me on site, and i've never heard the term before that. ;)
So I have a clue. lol
Good luck in the contest... this rocks!
Cat
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
Well, I sound AWESOME! I love that this is written in one of my favorite forms... iambic tetrameter/trimeter! Just like I write the Matilda series... Awesomely and perfectly penned, it just lilts along wonderfully... you stole my heart with this...
Thank you so much for saying such sweet things, and I can't wait to find out who wrote this... the term, 'one off' gives me a hint... only one other person has said that to me on site, and i've never heard the term before that. ;)
So I have a clue. lol
Good luck in the contest... this rocks!
Cat
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi Cat, You may be surprised LOL . I enjoyed writing this and so glad you liked it too. Thanks for your great review it should be an interesting contest.
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I can't wait! Tell me... What does "one-off" mean? Like, "one of a kind"?
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Yes 'one off' is like one of a kind 'unique' in a good way. Ha Ha Thats all you get
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That's all I need to know. At least I know you're not an American now. Lol
(Sneaky kitty!) lol
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Ha Ha sneaky Kitty, naughty puss Cat
Comment from John Parkin
I think you wrote about my daughter, only kidding but it could apply. I liked the flow of the poem from one verse to another. Each verse was distinct and stood on its own merit. I have had cats and you are so perceptive in your writing about how cats can manipulate and have such free spirits.
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
I think you wrote about my daughter, only kidding but it could apply. I liked the flow of the poem from one verse to another. Each verse was distinct and stood on its own merit. I have had cats and you are so perceptive in your writing about how cats can manipulate and have such free spirits.
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi John, Thanks for reading and reviewing my Cat poem. Yes this Cat is very distinct too and I had fun writing this about this free spirit . Cheers
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Your welcome.
Comment from nancyjam
This is such a great entry in the contest and
a wonderful tribute to "I Am Cat"
Great descriptions of various cats with
characteristics matched to her.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
This is such a great entry in the contest and
a wonderful tribute to "I Am Cat"
Great descriptions of various cats with
characteristics matched to her.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi Nancy, Many thanks for your review and I hope I have captured Cats qualities which are many it was enjoyable to think up and write so I so much appreciate your comments Cheers
Comment from foxangie123
The picture you chose is most amazing indeed as is the poetess you are penning about. She is very talented and has the outstanding intuition of the feline. She will be honored with this tribute I think.
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
The picture you chose is most amazing indeed as is the poetess you are penning about. She is very talented and has the outstanding intuition of the feline. She will be honored with this tribute I think.
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi foxangie123, Thankd for your great review for my Cat poem and yes she is very talented and the many Cats suit her perrrfectlyLOL. I hope she likes it too Cheers
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
An unique breed indeed. All nine lives were tested and tried and they are still alive and strong. A spirit that strong can not be broken easily.
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
An unique breed indeed. All nine lives were tested and tried and they are still alive and strong. A spirit that strong can not be broken easily.
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi Sandra, Yes This Cat has a strong spirit and I am sure has had many lives LOL , thanks for reading and reviewing this Cheers
Comment from Lisa Deverick
Being rather new around here, I don't know the personalities yet of many. Even so, your poem is an amazing tribute that I'm sure will be a wonderful gift for her to read. Your words are very clever and have a wonderful rhyme to them. Well done and good luck!
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
Being rather new around here, I don't know the personalities yet of many. Even so, your poem is an amazing tribute that I'm sure will be a wonderful gift for her to read. Your words are very clever and have a wonderful rhyme to them. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi Lisa, thank you for reading my Cat poem and glad you liked my words and rhyme . I am sure you will get to know her also Cheers for your good luck message also welcome to FS nice to meet you
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I'm with you, she's a multi-colored cat.
You've captured her personality and flavor so well!
Love the elimination of types of cats she's not.
Well done,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
I'm with you, she's a multi-colored cat.
You've captured her personality and flavor so well!
Love the elimination of types of cats she's not.
Well done,
Rhonda
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi Rhonda . Yes Cat sure is multi coloured and I am pleased you thought I captured her with my poem Thanks so much for your review I really appreciate you time and review