Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. Good job with the prompt. Good job with the rhyme and flow of lines.

Your 'story' is funny and was a fun read, too.

Good job. Best wishes in the contest.

Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Thanks for the good wishes and kind review. I'm not sure how it ended up as a "story". I asked Tom if it could be fixed, he said he's updated it now.

Comment from giraffmang

Good

Hi there,

This should really have been classified as a poem rather than coming up under prose. You need to carefully check which box you are selecting for this. If it's under prose it needs to be reviewed as such which means a poem will suffer.

The poem is very well done and very clever.
GMG

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 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Hi gmg, yes I asked Tom to re-classify it as soon as I noticed (which was about a minute after posting). He's done that now, I believe. Thanks.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is excellent.You hxve kept the rules xnd the rhyming is very well done. Nice flow/rhythm here! The presentxtion is well done...No "letter next to B" in sight!

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Thxnks for the fun review, ryme4u - it's very much xpprecixted! :)

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

Very nicely done! I loved the creative approach to this contest prompt. Your rhymes were good. I find this type of prompt to be difficult, but you did a good job.

Take care,
Russell

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Thanks for the kind words, Russell. They're much appreciated. :)

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Oh, how I wish I had six stars for it! Original, creative, adventuresome poem with great rhyming and meter. Those letters cone alive off your page! Awesome artistic presentation as well.

This was a real treat, good luck! In the contestð???ð???.

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Thanks, yeltel, for the lovely comments and good luck wishes. Both are really appreciated :)

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

What a darling take on a life without A's , It is harder than you think to accomplish that task. You did it. You did a great job on this wonderful rhyming poem. I love it.

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Thanks for the lovely review, jusylee :)

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is a perfect entry for this particular writing prompt dear anonymous! It's lighthearted and fun and I will see you at the voting booth.
Thanks for sharing a smile!
Good luck !
Blessings!
Rebekka x

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 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Thank you Rebekka for the lovely review, and the good wishes. Much appreciated :)