Comment from lancellot

Excellent

The title threw me at first, but after reading and clicking play, I did as the words suggested. I closed my eyes and listened with new ones. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thanks so much. The title is a bit unusual. So pleased you gave it a little extra time. Glad you enjoyed. mikey

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I enjoyed the classic view as well Mike, the poem opened up my imagination. Nice composition and a very nice and smooth read.

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

I like the bigger size. The new format seems a little scrunched. thanks a bunch, mikey

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Poetry and music blends together. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thanks, Charlie. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. mikey

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

Your poem has the essence of peace and serenity. The words are of melody, and deep thought. The poem is very well written and soothing, with a nice flow. This is an enjoyable relaxing poem, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

What wonderful words to hear. I'm just delighted. Thanks, mikey

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

I think you did an outstanding job with this poem. Excellent use of words and and music. The photo provides a great theme or backdrop. Give us a follow up piece soon!!

Wishing you all the best--
Bill

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Wow. How encouraging. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks, mikey

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This is a lovely video and the song is most beautiful. I love the soothing effect it has. However, I'm confused as the post is listed as Free Style. I see no poem so is my page missing something?

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 20-May-2016

Yes, there's supposed to be a poem embeded into a picture. I'll try and add it here and see if it goes through to you. Someone else said the same thing, but most people see it okay. :))

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nicely penned poem over a romantic photo with lovely music.
-Interesting style that doesn't require a lot of words to express your feelings.
-The message I get is: understand me, listen, as
"you are all around me
free to be."
-You are everything to me, "but only if you hear me."
-A love as profound as this "is rare."

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Wonderful. That is exactly what I'm trying to say. I'm so pleased the message comes through. Thanks so much. mikey

reply by Pam (respa) on 24-May-2016

You are very welcome. I appreciate your response, too. "Wonderful" is very nice to hear in the morning! Thanks for that. Very nice poem that I enjoyed.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

A sense poem
that makes sense
musical notes sounding softly
as fingertips lightly touch keys
to locked doors and hidden desires
a pianist speaking through music
a poet speaking through words
with the exotic wonder of the African wind
for it is rare, indeed
Reminds me a bit of a poem I posted not long age, A Tale of Almost
One speaking through light, the other through sound
both touching essence
softly
Had I but six African breezes
they would be yours
But five African stars is all that's left
Twill have to do

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Your beautiful words will more than suffice. I'm so pleased with your descriptions and take. Thanks so much. mikey

Comment from L.lora

Excellent

I really like the way you
presented this, from your
word choices to your formatting
and graphic choices. This was
a gentle read and it does sweep
your reader away...just like the
wind. Well done. No nits. Lora

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Hi, Lora
I'm so pleased you enjoyed this. It is very dear to me. Big smiles for your lovely words. mikey

reply by L.lora on 24-May-2016

Mikey it was a pleasure and you are very welcome. Lora

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

The piece was excellently chosen for the writing. I ususlly don't listen to the addition but since you said to , i listened.
Now bring yourself and some wine...lol. Sorry, i still think of you reading to me.lol
Nice piece...i know that is generic but i love piano and how the strings can present love and peace.

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

I'm going to have to record some of these. My voice is a little low and incredibly sexy. Is that okay? HAHAHAHA!!!!!!
So pleased you enjoyed this. mikey