I See Her
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Comment from jonathan1
What a lovely piece this is. I think a lot of people will be able to relate to this piece. It flows really well and the use of imagery is awesome.
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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What a lovely piece this is. I think a lot of people will be able to relate to this piece. It flows really well and the use of imagery is awesome.
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate
Comment from rbutner
Beautiful ode; I think these can be difficult to write without sounding stilted. Yours flows beautifully and has lovely imagery.
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Beautiful ode; I think these can be difficult to write without sounding stilted. Yours flows beautifully and has lovely imagery.
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you
Comment from William Ross
A great ode to I see her my take is the Lord and all his glory, very good, should do very well on this ode. well done and good luck have a good day
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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A great ode to I see her my take is the Lord and all his glory, very good, should do very well on this ode. well done and good luck have a good day
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate your review like always
Comment from dmt1967
I like the fact there is no picture. I shut my eyes and can see her in my minds eye, hence, there is no need to add to this image. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a great week.
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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I like the fact there is no picture. I shut my eyes and can see her in my minds eye, hence, there is no need to add to this image. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a great week.
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate your review
Comment from melyuki
Hi Sealord thanks for sharing this beautiful Ode.. Indeed it most certainly sheds light on the glorious beauty that mother nature provides for us and your descriptive lines create a warmth of emotion that emanates through your entire poem.
Delightfully crafted and best of luck to you in the contest .. cheers and smiles mel xx
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Hi Sealord thanks for sharing this beautiful Ode.. Indeed it most certainly sheds light on the glorious beauty that mother nature provides for us and your descriptive lines create a warmth of emotion that emanates through your entire poem.
Delightfully crafted and best of luck to you in the contest .. cheers and smiles mel xx
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate your review
Comment from AnnaLinda
Hi Poet,
I enjoyed reading your ode poem/entry.
You have a unique style here. I think
your use of "In the" at the start of five
lines with additional imagery works really well.
This is a very romantic piece. I am not
familiar with using "seals" in this fashion:
"In the clouds, that seals through the sky, carrying my fear away"
I looked up the definition on several sites and did not find that
to work...That does not mean it could not be used. If it is used
it seems like it should be "...that seal through the sky..." rather
than "seals" Please let me know how you came up with that.
Anyway, very nice entry here,
Linda
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Hi Poet,
I enjoyed reading your ode poem/entry.
You have a unique style here. I think
your use of "In the" at the start of five
lines with additional imagery works really well.
This is a very romantic piece. I am not
familiar with using "seals" in this fashion:
"In the clouds, that seals through the sky, carrying my fear away"
I looked up the definition on several sites and did not find that
to work...That does not mean it could not be used. If it is used
it seems like it should be "...that seal through the sky..." rather
than "seals" Please let me know how you came up with that.
Anyway, very nice entry here,
Linda
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate. The cloud protects from sky luminance distribution reducing the intensity of light ,in this poem the clouds acts as a shield ,when we have protection ,it takes our fear away. I don't know if that makes sense to you.
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You...I have a thing for clouds.
I got your theme...I just never
heard of "seals" used like that.
Write on,
Linda
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I think it sounds better with"seal" I will make the change
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Comment from foxangie123
This is a lovely and passionate write I read before. That is okay because lovely is lovely and doesn't cease to be in my book. A great entry to the contest indeed.
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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This is a lovely and passionate write I read before. That is okay because lovely is lovely and doesn't cease to be in my book. A great entry to the contest indeed.
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate your lovely review :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author now here is an Ode any lady wants to hear from her lover-
Nicely versed with such romantic words of praising who ever the lady is.
Gert
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Hello author now here is an Ode any lady wants to hear from her lover-
Nicely versed with such romantic words of praising who ever the lady is.
Gert
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Thank you my friend I appreciate
Comment from rmj09
This deserves ****** stars.
This meets the requirement of an Ode as it glorifies a Mother.
The poem focus is a woman near and dear to him.
The poem story line development: she is seen in the rays of the sun,lovingly bidding him to wake, caressing him with it's touch as the wind, as the earth she gives support and bids his to grow, as clouds sails through the sky carrying away fears, in the moon her beauty causes awe, in stars glittering jewels inspires hope in him, in the night she rocks him to sleep. This would be a great Mother's day tribute.
The rhythm is a slow moving body of water pulling the reader always forward.
The emotion felt joyful it reminds me of my mother, who is with God.
The natural pauses gives us time to reflect.
Keep on writing and bringing joy to others. Rita
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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This deserves ****** stars.
This meets the requirement of an Ode as it glorifies a Mother.
The poem focus is a woman near and dear to him.
The poem story line development: she is seen in the rays of the sun,lovingly bidding him to wake, caressing him with it's touch as the wind, as the earth she gives support and bids his to grow, as clouds sails through the sky carrying away fears, in the moon her beauty causes awe, in stars glittering jewels inspires hope in him, in the night she rocks him to sleep. This would be a great Mother's day tribute.
The rhythm is a slow moving body of water pulling the reader always forward.
The emotion felt joyful it reminds me of my mother, who is with God.
The natural pauses gives us time to reflect.
Keep on writing and bringing joy to others. Rita
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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wow Thank you so much I appreciate
Comment from Lisa Deverick
What a beautiful tribute you have penned with these words. This poem is as optimistic as a sunrise. It is an encouragement to continue on without her I believe. well done
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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What a beautiful tribute you have penned with these words. This poem is as optimistic as a sunrise. It is an encouragement to continue on without her I believe. well done
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Thank you for taking time to review my poem
