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Comment from damommy
What a good poem about Spring. About something other than flowers.
I felt like I was right there with the wind in my hair. Good descriptions.
Love the car! Thanks for sharing. 8-)
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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What a good poem about Spring. About something other than flowers.
I felt like I was right there with the wind in my hair. Good descriptions.
Love the car! Thanks for sharing. 8-)
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Ethan,myopic damommy.
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Not at all. I'm Yvonne, Ethan.
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Not at all. I'm Yvonne, Ethan.
Comment from patcelaw
This was a fun read. Sex appeal with you behind the wheel. men and their cars always think as the are driving a hot car, that makes them sexy. I will leave that to your wife to decide. HAHA. Patricia
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This was a fun read. Sex appeal with you behind the wheel. men and their cars always think as the are driving a hot car, that makes them sexy. I will leave that to your wife to decide. HAHA. Patricia
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you Patricia, she certainly agrees, I think. Lol.
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I am glad she does, for that makes for a happy home and marriage.
Comment from TAB_that's me
There is nothing like the breeze through your hair. Though I don't have a convertible, I love to feel the air when I ride my bicycle.
sex appeal and steering wheel - I like that.
Enjoy your ride!
teresa
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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There is nothing like the breeze through your hair. Though I don't have a convertible, I love to feel the air when I ride my bicycle.
sex appeal and steering wheel - I like that.
Enjoy your ride!
teresa
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank youbTeresa.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
It seems like a dream comes true. The top down and the wind through your hair. We are busy to cover up with blanket s galore our winter is knocking at the door.
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It seems like a dream comes true. The top down and the wind through your hair. We are busy to cover up with blanket s galore our winter is knocking at the door.
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Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you Sandra. You'll have your turn in your Spring
Comment from Joyce Long
Excellent poem. The reader is with you all the way as you take out your Pontiac and are ready to go for a fun ride. We had a '64 Plymouth red convertible that my husband drove in parades. One night we had a three hour ride home. We enjoyed every minute of that ride. Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 05-03-16
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Excellent poem. The reader is with you all the way as you take out your Pontiac and are ready to go for a fun ride. We had a '64 Plymouth red convertible that my husband drove in parades. One night we had a three hour ride home. We enjoyed every minute of that ride. Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 05-03-16
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Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you Joyce. They are fun.
