Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

I love the picture that you chose for a poem about May blossoms, and they do have a way about them, ever so modestly to still get out attention, especially after a winter, a new season is shown, with all its beauty and flowery fragrances... And think you put Summer scent to remind us of the next season to come, as May is Springtime, and that is the word I would of used.

Caressa_08

 Comment Written 02-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thank you for reading and sharing zanya

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

This is such a beautiful three five three. It is lovely all the way around and fragrances truth and beauty. A most excellent entry. See ya at voting. Bravo.

 Comment Written 02-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Great - thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

For me it is a strange thought to think of Spring and all the blossoms and new growth. We are in the season of autumn nearly winter. A very beautiful picture of blossoms

 Comment Written 02-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Wow great to hear from a Fanstorian on the other side of the planet !- thank you zanya

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

very nicely written...you can almost smell Summer is here...I love your beautiful poem...and the picture is stunning...beautiful

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thank you for reading zanya

reply by l.raven on 09-May-2016

you are so very welcome...xxoo Linda

Comment from pamelaperron

Good

flowers brought a strong essence to your poem. no 1 and 3 are capped is there a meaning to the lower caps or were the whole meant to be on straight threw?

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 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thank you for reading and the critique zanya

Comment from marion

Excellent

Hi there

These little ones are always so difficult to review - so few lines. And then I have to twist my head around May blossoms - it's early winter here in New Zealand! Our spring being October. Beautiful blossoms and I love how the scent lingers coyly - modest, bashful - playful. I usually relate blossoms to spring - maybe spring's scent, but on saying that, we have some trees and shrubs blossom in the summer. I enjoyed. Marion.

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Great to hear from a Fanstorian in NZ - Thank you for reading zanya

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Poet,

You did a great job in writing this 3-5-3 poem. The flowers are beautiful and what you wrote about them was wonderful too. It was fun to read and also to see.

MizKat

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from pmait

Excellent

Nice. Right now our lilacs are blooming, filling the air with seductive aromas. I share the experience, and I like the word "coyly," which makes your eleven syllables come alive.

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thanks for reading and the critique zanya

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

May blossoms is a very sweet 3-5-3 writing prompt entry. In this short sweet Paul you remind us that spring is here and that the flowers of May are on their way and the aroma will soon be filling the air. Thank you for sharing. May God bless you!

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thanks for reading and the critique zanya

reply by Dr. Nad on 11-May-2016

You are most welcome.
Embrace the love from above!

Comment from Jonadab Ezerie

Excellent

This is a unique poem and shows great writing style.Keep it up you are a winner Your poem is unique in it's own style.Great job

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

So encouraging -thank you zanya