Choices
A man's desire for 3 ladies17 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi sealord, we are always confronted with choices throughout life, and sometimes its difficult to make a decision. As this is about love then I will say, if you are in doubt then she is not the right one. I promise you would know otherwise. You will just know who you would like to be with and share everything with. A lovely written poem. I liked it. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Hi sealord, we are always confronted with choices throughout life, and sometimes its difficult to make a decision. As this is about love then I will say, if you are in doubt then she is not the right one. I promise you would know otherwise. You will just know who you would like to be with and share everything with. A lovely written poem. I liked it. All the best. Ulla:))
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Comment from Helen Bach
You illustrate your dilemma so well with your well written words. If this dilemma is a true one, I would suggest some time alone. The person you are meant to be with will be revealed. If superficial looks and sex are what you're after, your choice matters not for those relationships rarely last. You will end up doing what you want to do deep with in you anyway. Good luck with that but I hope you write about it and share because i'd love to read it.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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You illustrate your dilemma so well with your well written words. If this dilemma is a true one, I would suggest some time alone. The person you are meant to be with will be revealed. If superficial looks and sex are what you're after, your choice matters not for those relationships rarely last. You will end up doing what you want to do deep with in you anyway. Good luck with that but I hope you write about it and share because i'd love to read it.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
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Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
sealord, very nicely done work here. The conundrum of having to make that undesirable decision. That's why when you find the one, you should never regret your choice or look for greener pastures. Nothing but heartache. Reads very smoothly and great content. The verses are written so well there seems to be no division of thought in continuity. Liked very much. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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sealord, very nicely done work here. The conundrum of having to make that undesirable decision. That's why when you find the one, you should never regret your choice or look for greener pastures. Nothing but heartache. Reads very smoothly and great content. The verses are written so well there seems to be no division of thought in continuity. Liked very much. God bless and hugs, Susanne
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Comment from Dr. Nad
Choices is a poem that in reality is a metaphor of life. We are often invited to choose between two objects of desire, each with their effervescent glows and each with their ever present woes. In this short poem you have delineated positive qualities and allurements of both, but you haven't age or choice. You have invited us to join you in this decision-making process. So here's the answer you've been waiting for. You need to wait no longer! Choose the one "of great beauty!!!" LOL Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
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Choices is a poem that in reality is a metaphor of life. We are often invited to choose between two objects of desire, each with their effervescent glows and each with their ever present woes. In this short poem you have delineated positive qualities and allurements of both, but you haven't age or choice. You have invited us to join you in this decision-making process. So here's the answer you've been waiting for. You need to wait no longer! Choose the one "of great beauty!!!" LOL Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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lol wow Thanks for your candid advice. I appreciate
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You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nice work! I enjoyed your poem. I am not sure who you should go with. Perhaps both, lol. Is there a third option?
'Both bids me' You would suggest bid.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Nice work! I enjoyed your poem. I am not sure who you should go with. Perhaps both, lol. Is there a third option?
'Both bids me' You would suggest bid.
Take care,
Russell
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Thank you so much for your honest review , I appreciate
Comment from foxangie123
You are such an amazing and outstanding author. This is another example of pure excellence indeed. I love it and it's so great. Wow-ah.
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You are such an amazing and outstanding author. This is another example of pure excellence indeed. I love it and it's so great. Wow-ah.
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Thank you so much for you honest review , I appreciate:)
Comment from Pantygynt
Spoilt for choice I'd say. Oh I wish. Do you have to make a binding choice or can you try them out on approval as it were. So now serious advice. What is your natural preference blond or brunette? Toss a coin? Ask if either of them would choose you. Ask them if they'd like to share. Go for it!
Slight spag problem here "both" requires a plural forn in the verb.
Both bid(s) me to advance
Fear grips my heart , to trail such path; You have an extra space before the comma.
Layout is great. I am glad you took my words on that subject to heart.
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Spoilt for choice I'd say. Oh I wish. Do you have to make a binding choice or can you try them out on approval as it were. So now serious advice. What is your natural preference blond or brunette? Toss a coin? Ask if either of them would choose you. Ask them if they'd like to share. Go for it!
Slight spag problem here "both" requires a plural forn in the verb.
Both bid(s) me to advance
Fear grips my heart , to trail such path; You have an extra space before the comma.
Layout is great. I am glad you took my words on that subject to heart.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much for your honest review , I appreciate .Your review meant a lot to me
