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Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
= LOL! Much chaos has been derived from the loss of the remote control.
= Very cute limerick--although, not so much for the wife.
= Great entry for the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
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Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
Thanks Jax, much appreciated. I don't think there is a jury in the land that will convict him :)
Comment from
rspoet
This is a real clinker for the contest
A good limerick
nicely rhymed with good meter
It really stinks
to lose a good remote
I'll leave it up to the jury
to decide about the clink
Solid entry
Good luck in the contest
and with the jury
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
Thanks for the fun review and good wishes :)
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