Comment from L.lora

Excellent

This is definitely a hoot and so well
written. Your poem bounces along quite
merrily putting a smile on this reader's
face. Nice rhymes, great descriptive
verbiage. Very enjoyable, no nits or spags.
best always, Lora

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Hi Lora, thank you. I am pleased you enjoyed. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A well-written humorous poem. It is great when we are surrounded by family members who can make us laugh rather than make us cry. Lovely picture.

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Thanks, Sandra. Yes, fun picture! Thanks for your kind review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

You have to watch out for those grandparents. You never know what we might do LOL. This is a fun poem with good tempo and unforced rhyme. I enjoyed this one

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Thanks, Douglas. Thanks for your review. I hope this is how our grandchildren see us! Warmest regards, Marijke :o)