Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

We are never too old to find a 'sweetie' in our lives. Don't cares about going on your knees, you already have the answer. Lol.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Hi Sandra, thanks, I am pleased you enjoyed. That last stanza and line, sort of just popped up out of nowhere... I think my muse was in a strange mood. Thanks for laughing with me... Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This poem made me giggle. I would think at ninety-three the balls freezing would be the last of his problems lol. I mean if he got down on one knee he might not be able to get up lol. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Hi dmt1967, thanks, I am pleased you enjoyed. That last stanza and line, sort of just popped up out of nowhere... I think my muse was in a strange mood. Thanks for laughing with me... Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This genuinely made me laugh with that final line. t comes across as very sweet ... up until that point. Great finish.

All the best
GMG

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Hi GMG, thanks, I am pleased you enjoyed. That last stanza and line, sort of just popped up out of nowhere... I think my muse was in a strange mood. Thanks for laughing with me... Warmest regards, Marijke :o)