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Christine's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "A smile is free"
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Comment from artisart4u
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I like your "just a thought," a smile can mean everything to a person.

You have the right amount of words and I am sure people will read it
and ponder over it.

Good luck with it.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Hi artisart4u .Thanks for your review and I appreciate everyone who reads this. A smile can make your day and I enjoyed composing this 7 words and It payed off as I won the contest so many thanks for your support and I send a big smile to you Cheers Christine😀
reply by artisart4u on 21-Apr-2016
    Congratulations!
Comment from jusylee72
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Those are the happiest seven words I have ever seen and I cherish the idea that they are worth it. Thank you for a smile on my face. Great job of saying so much in only seven words.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Hi jusylee72. Thank you for saying this about my 7 words and I am glad you had a smile and I send you another one . Yes a smile is priceless and can make a difference so with a big grin I send you many Cheers Christine 😀 PS I am lucky enough to have won this contest also amongst some great entries so I am pleased 😃
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and topic for your poem.
-I like the capital letters on your main words.
-The message is good.
-"A smile can mean so much."

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Hi respa1. Thank you for your review and I hope this message gives people a smile and thanls again for your support of my work ( I had a win with this so smile is even bigger LOL ) Cheers to you and a smile sent 😀 Christine
reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Apr-2016
    Congratulations!! A big reason to :) You are welcome for the review and support; I think people will smile:)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    thank you very much I am so enjoying being on this site and have not written so much or learn't so much until doing so . Everyone is so helpful and encouraging my sincere thanks and appreciation to you Cheers Christine😃
reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Apr-2016
    You are so welcome. I agree about learning a lot and having fun on the site. You are always welcome for the encouragement and support. It is nice to share work.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    yes it sure is
reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Apr-2016
    Agreed:)
Comment from rspoet
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This is a very fine smile for the contest
Exactly seven words to the prompt
Excellent thought,
How the smallest of things can be so meaningful
Everyone should agree
Perfect picture to bring a smile to one's face
How can one not SMILE
Well done
Good luck and smiles in the contest

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Ho rspoet. Many thanks for your always great review of my work and Yes a small thing like a smile can mean much to others. ( I am pleased to say your good luck wishes worked as this did win so I am smiling for that also) Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Lannell912
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Just as this poem not a lot said yet saying so much ! We should all use this in our personal life just say something short and sweet or say nothing OH YEA AND SMILE!!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Thank you Lannell912 for your review and yes I am smiling a d send you one back ( I won the contest so these words must have hit a mark also) and I try to make this my daily event . a smile is worth a thousand words sometimes Cheers again Christine 😃
Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel
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I like your choice of seven. The illustration itself made me obey the internal command to "SMILE MUCH." This would do well in the contest in MHO, and I http://www.fanstory.com/mycomments.jsp?tb=wish you luck. CtVR.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Hi Cry the Vile Rebel. Thanks for your time to read and review my 7 words I can sse your smile and send one back 😀
    ( It won )and I am so pleased for everyones great support and also nice to meet you Cheers Christine
Comment from foxangie123
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This is so very true. I smile at everybody and actually become hurt when they don't smile back knowing they saw me. This is so great all the way round. Bravo...

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Hi foxangie Thank for reading my 7 words and Yes a smile deserves a smile but sometimes it doesn't happen but doesn't stop the next one given so heres a big smile back to you😀 Cheers Christine
Comment from robyn corum
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I like your message, AND like the fact that not only do you have a smiley face critter in the photo, he propped on a smiley face BOX. Rather cool. *smile* Good luck!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Hi Robyn, I an glad you like my message and I liked the smily face also and thought it a great one to use. your good luck has helped me to win this contest so I am smiling from all the lovely support given As always Cheers and a smile is sent to you😃Christine
Comment from Pantygynt
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It's coming I can feel it. It's definitely on its way. It's only a question of time before the contest will be launced to write the one word poem. You have made a great effort with your seven words but the smile won with so much more.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Hi Pantygynt. I saw it and beautiful too . Thanks you for your lovely support and it did win so I am very pleased and smiling. Had fun with this one also but a little bit serious as I believe in my words Cheers Christine😃
Comment from djeckert
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Awesom reminder for all of us. I love the picture. I'll just add that like a smile, some encouragement works in the same way. God Bless and thanks for sharing. Good luck

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Hi djeckert. and thanks for reading my poem and for your lovely words and good luck ( It won so I am very happy that people like it enough ) A big smile coming your way too Cheers Christine😃