Comment from RodG

Excellent

Oh, this was fun to read and had me chuckling throughout. Quite a family there, perhaps a bit dysfunctional, but interesting to meet.
My favorite "profile" is your description of Will.
Really clever rhyming of Ruth, truth, and tooth in stanza 2.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Thanks, Rod - much appreciated, glad you got a laugh out of it :) Craig

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Your sister, your mother, you're son;
Your fam'ly is whole lots of fun!
Your Limerick thrice,
'Twas done in a trice -
I'll bet you're quite glad it is done!

I have to say I like the last one best, with the little joke about 'chill'.

Steve

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Thanks, Steve. I am quite glad it's done, though I feel less apprehension about limericks than most of the other forms we get thrown at us! Cheers, Craig.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Great job with your Limerick suite, Craig. So Sting is in the family eh? I'd say you're about right in that they're both long in the tooth.

Lots of fun and I especially love the stick figure artwork.

You rocked the casbah with this one my dear.

Gloria

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Thank you Gloria, muchos gracias!