Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Michael...very nicely written...you have some wonderful lines...unique to only you...

you do have a passion for writing...

love your poem...and your video...
love you Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016

No that is true....nor I the muse inspiring. But it is my truth and I will not hide from it....or deny it voice because you don't. ......my passion plays out before it's understood sometimes.....most of the time. Faith trusts in itself....-smile-....love you michael

reply by l.raven on 06-Apr-2016

I never said I was denying your voice...I gave you a beautiful review...as I always do...because I have always loved and respected your poems...most of which I do understand...

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Desire unquenchable
eternally pure
the slow torture of autumn
as once green leaves fall
slower, please slower
closer
move...



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 Comment Written 06-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016

Yea that's pretty good too....-smile-.....I thank you kindly for your review. And wish upon you a most prosperous hump day. Love michael

Comment from bcwoods

Average

I found this poem hard to follow. The video confused me on what the poem meant. Because it was hard for me to follow, I didn't enjoy it. This may be your style, But for me, it didn't stur anything within.

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 Comment Written 06-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016

no kidding...?
funny how that doesn't surprise me. well what it meant was what your second to last two liner poem expressed to death...but of course I did it my way...-smile-....I dont think you're ready for my poetic expression. i'll let you know...big love-