Life's Observations and Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The worm has turned"This is my prologue for the NaPoWriMo 2016 (30 Poe
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Comment from AnnaLinda
Marijke,
I surely can relate to where your friend is at in her life.
I think you did a fantabulous job of interpreting her
place now and "try" at true freedom in her later years.
Your poem flows well and rhymes are unforced.
Well done,
Linda
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Marijke,
I surely can relate to where your friend is at in her life.
I think you did a fantabulous job of interpreting her
place now and "try" at true freedom in her later years.
Your poem flows well and rhymes are unforced.
Well done,
Linda
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Hi Linda, thank you for your comments and your kind and generous review. I'm pleased you can relate! Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from Helen Bach
Great stuff, I love it. Let that person dance right out of your poem and take you by the hand and go and have some fun. This is a smashing poem and it really made me smile x
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Great stuff, I love it. Let that person dance right out of your poem and take you by the hand and go and have some fun. This is a smashing poem and it really made me smile x
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Hi Helen, thank you for your comments your kind and generous review. I'm pleased you can relate! Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from fastdigits
A melody of words that rhyme their
way down the page in a light-hearted
manner, artistically illuminating the
inner feelings when sees the light,
and doesn't care what other's think.
Well done
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A melody of words that rhyme their
way down the page in a light-hearted
manner, artistically illuminating the
inner feelings when sees the light,
and doesn't care what other's think.
Well done
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Hi fastdigits, thank you for your comments and your kind and generous review. I'm pleased you can relate!
Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from Douglas Paul
I think we do all want to break out at times. E build our roles and then get trapped into them. Not always bad, but there is always the lure of being more free than we are.
Make sure you post a picture when you get your new wardrobe LOL
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I think we do all want to break out at times. E build our roles and then get trapped into them. Not always bad, but there is always the lure of being more free than we are.
Make sure you post a picture when you get your new wardrobe LOL
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Hi Douglas, thank you for your comments and your kind and generous review. I'm pleased you can to that lure...
Warmest regards, Marijke :o)