Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi ya,
you may be just playing around but it sounded goo.
Sometimes waffle is good. To talk of nothing and mean nothing means we don't have to be anything.
Sounds good to me,
Brenda

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thank you Brenda. Hi ya, back.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Quite a resemblance you could have been twins. Lol. A very creative free verse poem you have constructed and it seems that you have fun.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thank you Sandra. Just goofing around.

Comment from bluegill

Excellent

What a great self-deprecating piece. Since I am near or perhaps beyond your years I grasp the need, and fun, of such humor. Besides, I like Aristotle too, wattle or no, and I have oft throttled pages of a yet-to-be novel. Also, I like your free-style approach to poetry, a medium that I try from time to time.

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 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thank you very much bluegill. Glad you liked it.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Not bad poetic drivel a good free verse on modeling. fun, witty play with word, reads well. . thanks for the share and have a great day.

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 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thank you William.