Life's Observations and Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Barbed Wire Fence"This is my prologue for the NaPoWriMo 2016 (30 Poe
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Comment from tfawcus
It's an intractable problem. There seems no solution. The format of the Minute poem is just right for expressing your feelings about it, with the short sharp lines being so evocative.
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It's an intractable problem. There seems no solution. The format of the Minute poem is just right for expressing your feelings about it, with the short sharp lines being so evocative.
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much, tfawcus, I appreciate your kind comments and generous review. Yes, it is an intractable problem, I don't know what the answer is. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from jusylee72
I so agree with your poem and the picture. Imaging actually asking your child to live you so that they can have a better life. That goes against every instinct as a parent. I wish I had answers.
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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I so agree with your poem and the picture. Imaging actually asking your child to live you so that they can have a better life. That goes against every instinct as a parent. I wish I had answers.
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Thanks so much, jusylee, I appreciate your kind comments and generous review. Yes, it would be an impossible situation - you want to keep them close to protect, but when there is no protection... how heartbreaking. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from papa55mike
What a great job of writing this plea for help. So many of our children in this world are in grave danger. I love the picture, it's so powerful. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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What a great job of writing this plea for help. So many of our children in this world are in grave danger. I love the picture, it's so powerful. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much, papa55mike, I truly appreciate your kind comments and very generous six star review. Such heart-wrenching stories, it is difficult to watch the news. It makes me want to cry... but what is the answer? Thank you for caring. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)