Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Wow--what a spectacular, animated blue butterfly and midnight horizon to match! I particularly liked the circularity of "air I will be" at the beginning and end of your poem and the idea of "resurrected truth" in the final stanza. Cheers- Joan

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016

Well J its good to see you're not practicing voyeurism like the rest of my adoring fans...-smile-....you'd think they knew I was secretly rooting for Trump or something...-shouldershrug-.....well thank you good air circulation is must...and I pride myself on a well conditioned atmosphere. Always a pleasure my Dear...Guttan tug...-headnod- love Michael

reply by Joan E. on 14-Mar-2016

Perish the thought! Enjoy the good air circulation. Hugs and sweet dreams- Joan

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Michael, very beautifully written...I have read your poem a couple times...as in all of your poems baby....it is in your own unique wording...very nicely written...a beautiful picture...and a beautiful video...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016

Well...Hello....-smile-...let me help you...this is masterpiece of metaphor...from title to tippy toes we see every midnight has a dawn....it is also a great love story . -smile-...my name is Michael...big love-

reply by l.raven on 14-Mar-2016

I'll try to remember your name is Michael....your so welcomr... xxoo Linda

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016

love you Linda...-smile-

reply by l.raven on 14-Mar-2016

love you as well...xxoo me