Anti what?
A Wordsmith Entry - I'm sorry15 total reviews
Comment from busses
This is a great piece. I enjoyed the words and the art that went with it. You have a great talent with poetry. If I had to say anything to you it would be don't govern the talent you don't know you have. Try to write everything! You can't win unless you're IN!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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This is a great piece. I enjoyed the words and the art that went with it. You have a great talent with poetry. If I had to say anything to you it would be don't govern the talent you don't know you have. Try to write everything! You can't win unless you're IN!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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That would be true I suppose. I'm generally more of a mushy type writer, but this was kind of fun trying to figure out. Thanks for the encouraging review.
Comment from Gloria ....
Very cute poem, Dawn. I guess this is one way to increase one's vocabulary. Especially seeing the words used in a sentence.
Ha, very inventive use of the words, I especially liked the gastric sound at the end. ;-)
excellent response to the prompt. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Very cute poem, Dawn. I guess this is one way to increase one's vocabulary. Especially seeing the words used in a sentence.
Ha, very inventive use of the words, I especially liked the gastric sound at the end. ;-)
excellent response to the prompt. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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that was so hard. I really did not know what to do with antiparliamentarian, oh my goodness. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from patcelaw
Dawn, this was possibly a very hard to write about to include the rather obscure words. Nice word smith effort. Blessings for a good week, Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Dawn, this was possibly a very hard to write about to include the rather obscure words. Nice word smith effort. Blessings for a good week, Patricia
Comment Written 01-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Yeah it was really hard. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from RYME4U
This is well done. The words you were assigned were very difficult to assimilate into one poem but you managed to do it and add rhymes and illustrations too
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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This is well done. The words you were assigned were very difficult to assimilate into one poem but you managed to do it and add rhymes and illustrations too
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Very difficult. Thanks so much for the great review.
Comment from Douglas Paul
This flow and reads well although I did not understand a couple of your words at all....OH WAIT>> That was the whole point wasn't it? If that gastric gooblygookygnarly makes it's way over here Im done. NO.. don't attempt to make me stay
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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This flow and reads well although I did not understand a couple of your words at all....OH WAIT>> That was the whole point wasn't it? If that gastric gooblygookygnarly makes it's way over here Im done. NO.. don't attempt to make me stay
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Dang that was much harder than I though. How do you use gastric without offending? Keep Gnarly away from me!!
Thanks for the grand review.
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OK Now gnarly feels rejected. I hate to see the poor bear crying like this
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Oh no my example could quite possibly be the theme of the next Limerick. Shaking
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You never can tell