A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Questions"Assorted poems of love
26 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Missy, true love...where couples fight to stay together are gone...true love is so very rare...but it is out there somewhere...just not for every one...very well written sweet one...and your picture is beautiful...love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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HI Missy, true love...where couples fight to stay together are gone...true love is so very rare...but it is out there somewhere...just not for every one...very well written sweet one...and your picture is beautiful...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Linda, thanks hon, for this lovely review. Your reviews always brighten my day :)
Missy
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Missy,
you know what I think? You're a writer, right? Yes, of course you are, but nothin' like these stories of how the hearts crying to allow the mind to sing and compose the blues... guess it's one of my favorite heart connections to music... the material that causes and stirs emotion on a far different level... first it sucks you into the vortex to the tapped-out feeling of 'what the hell happened' loss... reflection and then the memories that cannot be removed once they are burnt in through deep desire... and then you leave the whole thing dangling in the breeze that only time creates... yeah, love the lingering conclusion... that really isn't...'cause we just never know what's going to happen in our next breath... or as it may be... the lingering tear filled with droplets of the heart.
So wonderfully presented, the colour scheme and visual added a real punch to the story of it... and that lingering tear? Well it added length to an a story that already had me sitting back in my chair in deep contemplation... wow, hope time reveals sooner, rather than later... detest that waiting in limbo!
With our thoughts we create,
a keeper of the heart,
James vx's.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Hi Missy,
you know what I think? You're a writer, right? Yes, of course you are, but nothin' like these stories of how the hearts crying to allow the mind to sing and compose the blues... guess it's one of my favorite heart connections to music... the material that causes and stirs emotion on a far different level... first it sucks you into the vortex to the tapped-out feeling of 'what the hell happened' loss... reflection and then the memories that cannot be removed once they are burnt in through deep desire... and then you leave the whole thing dangling in the breeze that only time creates... yeah, love the lingering conclusion... that really isn't...'cause we just never know what's going to happen in our next breath... or as it may be... the lingering tear filled with droplets of the heart.
So wonderfully presented, the colour scheme and visual added a real punch to the story of it... and that lingering tear? Well it added length to an a story that already had me sitting back in my chair in deep contemplation... wow, hope time reveals sooner, rather than later... detest that waiting in limbo!
With our thoughts we create,
a keeper of the heart,
James vx's.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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James, you know how much I love your reviews ...this is a wonderful example of all the ways you stir with words. :)
Missy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Well, the ones that poof are probably not all they seemed to be in the first place. This is so you and a wonderful piece. Your style is simply wonderful as it is down to earth and still filled with genuine emotion. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Well, the ones that poof are probably not all they seemed to be in the first place. This is so you and a wonderful piece. Your style is simply wonderful as it is down to earth and still filled with genuine emotion. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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You are so right there, Monica. I love your reviews, sweet lady. Thank you for this one :)
Missy
Comment from lightink
Oh yes, grieving a break up comes in waves indeed! Sometimes a rainy tree brings up those memories or the chilly wind - and they become alive again.
Just like in your bittersweet poem! I'm sorry that it keeps coming back this way!
However, your poems are a beautiful outlet...
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Oh yes, grieving a break up comes in waves indeed! Sometimes a rainy tree brings up those memories or the chilly wind - and they become alive again.
Just like in your bittersweet poem! I'm sorry that it keeps coming back this way!
However, your poems are a beautiful outlet...
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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LI, thanks for always being a name I see in reviews...I know the money is not much but you are always here for me :)
Missy
Comment from Linda Engel
Men get scared and feel the trapped wolf in the steel trap feeling. Or they just don't or won't settle down. I had to learn to spot them, enjoy them and let them go. It is the quiet ones that make better partners.
Good poem and well expressed.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Men get scared and feel the trapped wolf in the steel trap feeling. Or they just don't or won't settle down. I had to learn to spot them, enjoy them and let them go. It is the quiet ones that make better partners.
Good poem and well expressed.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Haha!! I like to talk so, it is good to have a "quiet one". Thanks hon for the lovely review :)
Missy
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Missy
= So true. Sometimes one gets too comfortable and you're right ... poof!
= Beautiful artwork and formatting.
= Of course, love gone wrong can be a blessing in disguise when, like in my case, Mr. Right comes along. (*<*) Whoohoo!
* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie (*>*) Jax
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Hi, Missy
= So true. Sometimes one gets too comfortable and you're right ... poof!
= Beautiful artwork and formatting.
= Of course, love gone wrong can be a blessing in disguise when, like in my case, Mr. Right comes along. (*<*) Whoohoo!
* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie (*>*) Jax
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Hi Jackie, thanks for the sweet review sug. :)
Missy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend :) I know what you mean, I hear you. I also thought I had the best relationship in the world until it ended. I like your style and form, very well written!
gypsy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Hello, my friend :) I know what you mean, I hear you. I also thought I had the best relationship in the world until it ended. I like your style and form, very well written!
gypsy
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Hi Gypsy, thanks hon for the confidence building review :)
Missy
Comment from Ric Myworld
Unfortunately, sometimes we expect too much from people. Looking for perfection, which doesn't exist. The real secret being, for someone to care as much about you as you do them. Huh, damn if that still isn't pretty hard to do. Thanks for another fine poem. :-)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Unfortunately, sometimes we expect too much from people. Looking for perfection, which doesn't exist. The real secret being, for someone to care as much about you as you do them. Huh, damn if that still isn't pretty hard to do. Thanks for another fine poem. :-)
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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It is hard, Ric :(
We just have to not give up or give into failures. It is out there waiting :)
Missy
Thank you
Comment from Pantygynt
I sympathize with your loss if loss it is and not just a short separation. It is a beautiful little piece although it leaves me in two minds about "marathon love making". Having actually run in one marathon (and I won't be doing that again) I am having a problem over which part of the 26.2 miles you are equating to the act of love. As I remember the beginning was too fast, the middle too long and then I hit the "wall and staggered to the finish". Or did you mean you did it 26.2 times? If so the point 2 is worrying me. Lol.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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I sympathize with your loss if loss it is and not just a short separation. It is a beautiful little piece although it leaves me in two minds about "marathon love making". Having actually run in one marathon (and I won't be doing that again) I am having a problem over which part of the 26.2 miles you are equating to the act of love. As I remember the beginning was too fast, the middle too long and then I hit the "wall and staggered to the finish". Or did you mean you did it 26.2 times? If so the point 2 is worrying me. Lol.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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No not 26.2 miles but maybe 6 beautiful hours of bliss with a tiny break for food and drink ...lol.
Thanks, Gynt for the thought provoking review, hon.
Missy
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, crap! (oops, my bad - it slipped out, honestly...) Here we were so happy just one posting ago...I do hope this isn't biographical. Most of mine are not, although I draw from that well of experience as well as observation...
Yes, that's my reaction to tis sad poem -'ah, crappola! Sometimes life just sucks!'
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Ah, crap! (oops, my bad - it slipped out, honestly...) Here we were so happy just one posting ago...I do hope this isn't biographical. Most of mine are not, although I draw from that well of experience as well as observation...
Yes, that's my reaction to tis sad poem -'ah, crappola! Sometimes life just sucks!'
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Yep, it sure as heck does!!! (changed from hell to heck for the sensitive here in fanworld)
Thanks sugga for the smartass review...I LOVE IT!!
Missy