Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

An amazing tanka indeed. That picture is stunning as well. As always you have done a magnificent job again. Wow. Simply magical as always...

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016

Thank you, Angie, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from AnnieDawn

Excellent

Very cute poem and complimentary picture. His attention span is about as long as mine is at times. I hope you have this entered into a contest as It would have a good chance. I enjoyed it. It was a good chuckle for the day.

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016

Thank you, Annie, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

LOL!!! Some days I feel exactly like that. My mind wanders and I can't focus on the writing at hand. I know little about the tanka except that it has a syllable count of 5-7-5-7-7 and has a turn of sorts in line three. You got me laughing with this one, Bill :)

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016

Thank you, Joy, for the upbeat review. Bill