Comment from anabellapongasi

Excellent

I like the very positive and inspiring message of this lovely piece, very well written in good trinet form. You have mentioned all the important keys needed for a brighter, better year. I especially like the third stanza:
Pray More
Seek God
Release all hate from your heart
Allow love to blossom within you
Be committed
Trust God
Brighter days

Best wishes in the contest..
Blessings,
Anabella

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Anabella,
Thanks so much for your support, review and very kind comments and congratulation on the win, well deserved. Blessings my friend.......................Portia

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your poem for this prompt is beautiful. It is full of great reasons to move forward. The presentation is super--the color scheme, the image, the strong message all work together to create an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Janny,

As always I appreciate your support, review and very kind comments. Blessings................Portia ( I just returned home from having surgery, I will on bedrest for the next two weeks which will give me time to get caught up on reviewing as well as replying to reviews. My box is full so I will tackle it tomorrow)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good poem you have penned. It is full of great advice to all. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Great job. Enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Teri7,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.......................Portia

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Poet,

Now this is a very positive poem and fantastic entry
for the Trinet poem contest! Usually I would read
the directions for the form...in this case I am taking
your poem and message as perfect as is...assuming
your form is correct...hope that's ok:)

Not looking back at mistakes, being thankful for
what we have and releasing hate are all keys that
will make for a happy life...especially while trusting
in God.

Thanks for this gift of a poem and best wishes
in the contest!

Linda

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016

Linda,

Thanks so much for such a wonderful review, your very kind comments are greatly appreciated. Blessings my friend............

Comment from kathleenspalding

Excellent

Very nice inspirational poem. I'm not familiar with trinet so I am trusting that the requirements are met. The poem flows well and delivers a good, worthwhile message. Good use of artwork. I would recommend this poem to everyone! Here's to brighter days! :-)

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for such a wonderful and kind review, your comments are greatly appreciated and I know they will make my days brighter. Thanks so much for your kindness Blessings..................................