A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Keys"Assorted poems of love
37 total reviews
Comment from ciliverde
Ah, the music of love...how wonderful that is, new love. Life does become exciting in those times of new love. That music may be everlasting...but you know, love does change with time...in a good way, of course :)
Well done,
Carol
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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Ah, the music of love...how wonderful that is, new love. Life does become exciting in those times of new love. That music may be everlasting...but you know, love does change with time...in a good way, of course :)
Well done,
Carol
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I really hate to do this but because I am ill at the moment and have so many to reply to I am gonna copy and paste this generic and unsatisfactory reply to all my lovely reviews. Please forgive me.
Missy
Comment from Dean Kuch
And what a wonderfully written contribution to the Picture This Poetry Challenge Group it is, Missy. It most common to think of someone coming into your heart and tugging your heartstrings. But I like the metaphorical implications of the heart having keys to be tickled.
This lovely little verse lend an entirely new meaning to the phrase, "He (or she) played me like an instrument."
Wonderfully composed
beautifully written.
~Dean ;)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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And what a wonderfully written contribution to the Picture This Poetry Challenge Group it is, Missy. It most common to think of someone coming into your heart and tugging your heartstrings. But I like the metaphorical implications of the heart having keys to be tickled.
This lovely little verse lend an entirely new meaning to the phrase, "He (or she) played me like an instrument."
Wonderfully composed
beautifully written.
~Dean ;)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Comere sugga and let me give you a big ol smooch!! I love this.
No smooch? How's about a hug?
Missy
Comment from lightink
Missy, this is such a lovely way of intertwining love and music - just a light, tender piano reference, but it says so much about the music of the soul!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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Missy, this is such a lovely way of intertwining love and music - just a light, tender piano reference, but it says so much about the music of the soul!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I really hate to do this but because I am ill at the moment and have so many to reply to I am gonna copy and paste this generic and unsatisfactory reply to all my lovely reviews. Please forgive me.
Missy
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Get better, Dear!
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Missy,
Woot, woot. Here is the love poem I was expecting. I love it. You did get two poems from the picture. I could have gotten several from it also. You have picked a lovely image. Oh how I love your poems. It is so perfect. If you read the other review you already know I am out of six stars. But my heart sends you millions.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Missy,
Woot, woot. Here is the love poem I was expecting. I love it. You did get two poems from the picture. I could have gotten several from it also. You have picked a lovely image. Oh how I love your poems. It is so perfect. If you read the other review you already know I am out of six stars. But my heart sends you millions.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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I do know, sweetie and I am delighted that you wanted to give one. I am out too!! Hugs and kisses
Missy
Save all the kisses for the new lil man in your life :)
Comment from mfowler
You're getting a lot of inspiration from this image. This one is very nice. You rely heavily on the images of heart and music which is something that I really enjoy. It is so much better to have unified imagery, particularly in something short and sweet, so that a totality of feeling about the poem is left in the reader's mind. You've got a great vibe here with the progression of ideas from the song entering the heart, to the increased value you see in life once connected. and finally to a love that goes on forever. One language feature that stands out for me here is the choice of three perfect adverbs to close out the verses. It gives the poem a little kicker at each point of segue to the next verse and adds a nice symmetry to the structure. This is a good one. Keep writing and have a happy, new year, my friend.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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You're getting a lot of inspiration from this image. This one is very nice. You rely heavily on the images of heart and music which is something that I really enjoy. It is so much better to have unified imagery, particularly in something short and sweet, so that a totality of feeling about the poem is left in the reader's mind. You've got a great vibe here with the progression of ideas from the song entering the heart, to the increased value you see in life once connected. and finally to a love that goes on forever. One language feature that stands out for me here is the choice of three perfect adverbs to close out the verses. It gives the poem a little kicker at each point of segue to the next verse and adds a nice symmetry to the structure. This is a good one. Keep writing and have a happy, new year, my friend.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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You just keep giving, Mark. I am so indebted to you, for standing tall for me. Not letting me pout and get away with it :) You pushed even as I was pushing back. You made me stop and look. I truly believe I have grown...thanks to you. xx
Always,
Missy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Missy :)
Beautiful poem for the Picture This challenge. Your picture inspired a lot of different kinds of poems. It's fun to see what everyone comes up with. :) Good job with yours, I love it!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Hello Missy :)
Beautiful poem for the Picture This challenge. Your picture inspired a lot of different kinds of poems. It's fun to see what everyone comes up with. :) Good job with yours, I love it!
Gypsy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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I am glad you like this one. It was first. :) Sometimes they write themselves, by just looking at a picture. I get all lost trying to write without my heart being involved. I was ready to give up on poetry until I found free verse. I like this alot.
Thank you, sweetie.
Missy
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I am so glad you feel the same. I have a hard time with rhyme and meter. I do better with free verse. I'm trying to learn but it's frustrating.
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I need to take a class, I think.
Comment from royowen
A lovely contribution to these varying interpretations of this artwork, and this is yet another fascinating one, beautiful adaptation of the great artwork, well done, Missy, blessings my friend, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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A lovely contribution to these varying interpretations of this artwork, and this is yet another fascinating one, beautiful adaptation of the great artwork, well done, Missy, blessings my friend, Roy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Hello, Roy :)
Thank you very much for reading and leaving this special review of my contribution to this "Picture This" challenge.
Blessings to you as well, sir.
Missy
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My pleasure, Missy,
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Missy
= Look at you--two poems! (*<*)
= I like the different aspects you took on each one.
= You just can't go wrong with love.
Keep Smilin'...
Jax/Jackie (*<*)
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Hi, Missy
= Look at you--two poems! (*<*)
= I like the different aspects you took on each one.
= You just can't go wrong with love.
Keep Smilin'...
Jax/Jackie (*<*)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Hi, Jax, I guess you can tell by facebook, I am feeling like crap. I hate to copy and paste replies, so I am taking my time...when I really just want to lie still. That being said, thank you hon for the sweet review. xx
Missy
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Hope you feel better, soon. (*<*)
Comment from evilynne
Lovely poem with well chosen words. It is enjoyable reading with its own message, different from the other messages the picture evokes. Evi
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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Lovely poem with well chosen words. It is enjoyable reading with its own message, different from the other messages the picture evokes. Evi
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I really hate to do this but because I am ill at the moment and have so many to reply to I am gonna copy and paste this generic and unsatisfactory reply to all my lovely reviews. Please forgive me.
Missy
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No problem. Evi
Comment from G.B. Smith
OH MY GOODNESS, This is so lovely
I love the artwork as well
That is a long list of poets to compete with. I know you'll do well
Bear
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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OH MY GOODNESS, This is so lovely
I love the artwork as well
That is a long list of poets to compete with. I know you'll do well
Bear
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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It is not a competition, so to speak, hon. It is just a way to make new friends and see what we can come up with looking at one picture. :)
Thank you kind sir, for this lovely review and the added bling of the 6.
Missy xx