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Comment from Jay Squires
What lovely sentiment in your post, Nicole. I know your writing has made quantum improvement (I have no idea what quantum ACTUALLY means, but substitute "bunches of") this last year. I feel mine has also improved, more in the area of grammar and economy of language. Of course I didn't enter contests this year. Anyway, Nicole, I don't want to get all weepy, but I sincerely thank you for all the support you gave me in 2015. Let's both publish in 2016. Okay?
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
What lovely sentiment in your post, Nicole. I know your writing has made quantum improvement (I have no idea what quantum ACTUALLY means, but substitute "bunches of") this last year. I feel mine has also improved, more in the area of grammar and economy of language. Of course I didn't enter contests this year. Anyway, Nicole, I don't want to get all weepy, but I sincerely thank you for all the support you gave me in 2015. Let's both publish in 2016. Okay?
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Yes, cheers to that, Jay.
It's already NY's Eve here. I'll be going off line soon to be with my family.
Happy New Year!
Nicole
Comment from Spitfire
What an inspirational write. I'm a competitive person and like the ranking system on FS even if flawed. The best writing is often done by those who post less often because they spend more time perfecting the piece. I just wish reviewers could be more honest. Not everything is excellent by far. Sigh...
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
What an inspirational write. I'm a competitive person and like the ranking system on FS even if flawed. The best writing is often done by those who post less often because they spend more time perfecting the piece. I just wish reviewers could be more honest. Not everything is excellent by far. Sigh...
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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True!
It's already NY's Eve here, so I'll be going off-line to be with my family.
Happy New Year!
Nicole
Comment from tfawcus
This is so true. The only really worthwhile challenge is challenging yourself. Comparison with other is always invidious. Doing better than you did before is always a win.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
This is so true. The only really worthwhile challenge is challenging yourself. Comparison with other is always invidious. Doing better than you did before is always a win.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Yes, true, Tony. Thanks.
It's already NY's Eve here, so I'll be going off-line to be with my family.
Happy New Year!
Nicole
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Nicole
= Cool 'factoid' chapter.
= Love, love Andrea Bocelli.
= John Lennon, not so much, but to each his own.
= No matter what little gain we make, as you say, we still win.
= All kinds of winning. Nice job. (*<*)
* HAPPY NEW YEAR - 2016! *
Cheers & Blessings...
Keep Smilin'... Jackie/Jax (*>*)
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
Hi, Nicole
= Cool 'factoid' chapter.
= Love, love Andrea Bocelli.
= John Lennon, not so much, but to each his own.
= No matter what little gain we make, as you say, we still win.
= All kinds of winning. Nice job. (*<*)
* HAPPY NEW YEAR - 2016! *
Cheers & Blessings...
Keep Smilin'... Jackie/Jax (*>*)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Jax.
Happy NY!
Nicole
Comment from Mastery
Very well stated, Nicole. And you give some wonderful examples of winners overcoming disabilities in your essay. Congratulations on your ranking by the way, it seems you will be in the top five at the end of the year and you deserve it. Bob
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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
Very well stated, Nicole. And you give some wonderful examples of winners overcoming disabilities in your essay. Congratulations on your ranking by the way, it seems you will be in the top five at the end of the year and you deserve it. Bob
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Bob. I don't believe in counting my chicks before they've hatched. Anything can happen.
Happy NY to you!
Nicole
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
BRAVO! Very well said, Nicole. You are so right that the true winners in life are those who learn, and not only how to improve skills for their own benefit, but those who learn compassion for others. That has its own reward, for it makes us feel like good, kind, generous people, which creates self-respect... something that is hard to come by on our own. :)
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
BRAVO! Very well said, Nicole. You are so right that the true winners in life are those who learn, and not only how to improve skills for their own benefit, but those who learn compassion for others. That has its own reward, for it makes us feel like good, kind, generous people, which creates self-respect... something that is hard to come by on our own. :)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Phyllis, for your kind R&R.
It's already NY's Eve here, so I'll be going off-line to be with my family.
Happy New Year!
Nicole
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Awesome post! Wish I had a six for it. It makes so much sense. We are a diverse bunch, each with a unique outlook on things. Someone once asked me if I was a success with my books. I answered that completing a novel makes me a success. Anything that follows is simply a bonus.
:)
Great essay. Bravo.
Av
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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
Awesome post! Wish I had a six for it. It makes so much sense. We are a diverse bunch, each with a unique outlook on things. Someone once asked me if I was a success with my books. I answered that completing a novel makes me a success. Anything that follows is simply a bonus.
:)
Great essay. Bravo.
Av
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Thank you for your kind review, Avril.
It's already NY's Eve here, so I'll be going off-line to be with my family.
Happy New Year!
Nicole