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Comment from w.j.debi
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I have wondered how they come up some of the cereal names. The logic often escapes me. This makes as much sense as any I have heard and it has a funny twist at the end. Good luck in the contest and have a wonderful New Year.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
    Thank you, w.j., for the excellent review.
Comment from Curly Girly
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This was an amusing read.
Branding and merchandising are weird. Rules that worked years ago are now upstaged by modern people and don't necessarily work better. Things are in a constant state of change.
Happy New Year!
Nicole

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 Comment Written 30-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
    Thank you, CG, for the excellent review.