Snow Day
How my son feels on snow days16 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Fun day is snow day. Something we don't see but once every few years here in Houston. So much said in these tiny shorts. Well crafted and sure to be well received.
God bless!
steve
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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Fun day is snow day. Something we don't see but once every few years here in Houston. So much said in these tiny shorts. Well crafted and sure to be well received.
God bless!
steve
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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I understand. We have moved to Florida, so no more snow for us.
Thank you for the great review and stars
Blessings,
Katie
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My pleasure!
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My pleasure!
Comment from Gloria ....
The first thing I do to check to make sure the story is in the poem is pull the picture up so I can't see it.
Yours works one hundred percent. I know exactly what's happening having loved as a child, as most children do, not only a snow day off school, but sliding down the mountains on snow-filled garbage bags.
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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The first thing I do to check to make sure the story is in the poem is pull the picture up so I can't see it.
Yours works one hundred percent. I know exactly what's happening having loved as a child, as most children do, not only a snow day off school, but sliding down the mountains on snow-filled garbage bags.
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Gloria,
Thank you so much for your read and review. I love that you removed the picture to see if the poem still makes sense. I do the same thing.
Thank you for the generous stars
Comment from AJGOLD
Lovely.
I will never try to write poetry, but I wonder and I am amazed in what a writer can do with so few words.
You drew a beautiful picture.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Lovely.
I will never try to write poetry, but I wonder and I am amazed in what a writer can do with so few words.
You drew a beautiful picture.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Poetry is like a puzzle that needs to be put together. LOL my husband says I'm strange...
Thank you for reading and reviewing this piece.
Blessings,
Katie
Comment from anabellapongasi
Katie, what a cute little poem and picture of your son. What a happy and fun time for kids when school is out and they can play in the snow :)
Schools out
The snows calling me (I'm afraid you have 5 syllables in this line. to remedy you can remove "the" )
Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Katie, what a cute little poem and picture of your son. What a happy and fun time for kids when school is out and they can play in the snow :)
Schools out
The snows calling me (I'm afraid you have 5 syllables in this line. to remedy you can remove "the" )
Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Oh my thank you for catching that silliness. I will fix that right away. I appreciate your review and your eyes.
Blessings
Katie
Comment from Judith Ann
This made me grin. Yes, snow days and so many emotions accompany the call. Then parents have to scramble to plan their day. But, as your picture and words attest -- memories are made on snow days. -Good luck in the contest. - Judy
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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This made me grin. Yes, snow days and so many emotions accompany the call. Then parents have to scramble to plan their day. But, as your picture and words attest -- memories are made on snow days. -Good luck in the contest. - Judy
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Thank you. He used to love to go sledding.
Comment from AnnaLinda
Katie,
Haha...guess you and your son won't be seeing many of
those snow days anymore when living in south Florida:)
This is a really cute 2-4-2 entry and you've said a lot
with those few 8 syllables.
Love the image you conjured up of the delight of your
son with having no school and excited about going
sledding.
Great job on this!
Linda
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Katie,
Haha...guess you and your son won't be seeing many of
those snow days anymore when living in south Florida:)
This is a really cute 2-4-2 entry and you've said a lot
with those few 8 syllables.
Love the image you conjured up of the delight of your
son with having no school and excited about going
sledding.
Great job on this!
Linda
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Thank you very much Linda for your kind review. Evan used to love sledding, now he loves swimming and playing in the waves.
Blessings,
Katie
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Both are great! My older son went from snowboarding to surfing in San Diego...:)
