2nd Time Around
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Comment from Jacob Collins
You held my interest with this piece, pscholz and I found it an entertaining read. You wrote the piece well and the action flowed well, I couldn't find my faults with your work. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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You held my interest with this piece, pscholz and I found it an entertaining read. You wrote the piece well and the action flowed well, I couldn't find my faults with your work. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Thank you. That's very kind. I'll admit I fell in love with these characters as I developed them.