Hawaiian Time
People in Hawaii are laid back33 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Monty,
I know what you mean. I"ve never beet to Hawaii but I understand the concept and in Spain (where I'm from) people are laid back like that too. Nice rhyme and meter. Good job!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Hello Monty,
I know what you mean. I"ve never beet to Hawaii but I understand the concept and in Spain (where I'm from) people are laid back like that too. Nice rhyme and meter. Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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thank you
Comment from foxangie123
I want to be right where that picture is at the moment taken. Your poem is just as beautiful as it wraps lovliness within each line read. It reminded me of country folk rising to a rooster call. When do we get back to that too? Another amazingly Phenominal write....
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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I want to be right where that picture is at the moment taken. Your poem is just as beautiful as it wraps lovliness within each line read. It reminded me of country folk rising to a rooster call. When do we get back to that too? Another amazingly Phenominal write....
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Thank you so much thats pretty high praise
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You deserve it...
Comment from MelB
A very nice poem with great flow, rhythm, and rhyme. I have always wanted to go to Hawaii. It looks absolutely beautiful! I would love living where no one is in a hurry and people were less stressed.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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A very nice poem with great flow, rhythm, and rhyme. I have always wanted to go to Hawaii. It looks absolutely beautiful! I would love living where no one is in a hurry and people were less stressed.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from lancellot
A good poem, with a nice alternating rhyme scheme. Subject wise, it does generalize, but that's okay. It is still a nice idea, and I wish it were entirely true. Well crafted.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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A good poem, with a nice alternating rhyme scheme. Subject wise, it does generalize, but that's okay. It is still a nice idea, and I wish it were entirely true. Well crafted.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you for nice review
Comment from writeapoem
A delightful poem on Hawaii a nation that always intrigued me. I thought your perception made that connection with the people great. All the best Happy New YeAR
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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A delightful poem on Hawaii a nation that always intrigued me. I thought your perception made that connection with the people great. All the best Happy New YeAR
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you for nice review
Comment from c_lucas
Time stands still and a leisurely style is the norm. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very easy read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Time stands still and a leisurely style is the norm. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very easy read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you for nice review
Comment from Just2Write
Wow - how nice to see a posting from you. Yes, Hawaii lives at a different pace - and in my opinion, it is a far more sane one than ours.
Loved your easy-breezy lines. I could sure picture island life while reading them.
Rose.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Wow - how nice to see a posting from you. Yes, Hawaii lives at a different pace - and in my opinion, it is a far more sane one than ours.
Loved your easy-breezy lines. I could sure picture island life while reading them.
Rose.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you for nice review
Comment from Louise Michelle
You certainly did a good job of capturing the laid back attitude of these islanders. I think Hawaii has to be one of the most luxurious places to live. Tiny spag in your notes: ABOUT Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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You certainly did a good job of capturing the laid back attitude of these islanders. I think Hawaii has to be one of the most luxurious places to live. Tiny spag in your notes: ABOUT Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you for nice review
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
This is a very lovely poem with a soothing mood. The images are warm and nice. My husband has family in Hawaii, and they are the warmest, nicest family that welcomes newcomers. They have a great energy and are very pleasant to be around. This is a nice read. I really love this line:
Just a rock in the ocean rolling with the tides
Happy New Year!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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This is a very lovely poem with a soothing mood. The images are warm and nice. My husband has family in Hawaii, and they are the warmest, nicest family that welcomes newcomers. They have a great energy and are very pleasant to be around. This is a nice read. I really love this line:
Just a rock in the ocean rolling with the tides
Happy New Year!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you for nice review
Comment from mauial
I like the thought behind your poem, but in reality we in Hawaii have the same problems and concerns as others elsewhere. True, we are a little more laid back then elsewhere in the U.S. Hawaiian time actually means that one always arrives late.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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I like the thought behind your poem, but in reality we in Hawaii have the same problems and concerns as others elsewhere. True, we are a little more laid back then elsewhere in the U.S. Hawaiian time actually means that one always arrives late.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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thank you for nice review