Thoughtful Poems and Prose
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Christmas is a happy time!
Listen to those church bells chime!
Come, worship His Majesty!
Let us unite--affably.
what a bright, cheery poem, Nicole -
your words describing what Christmas
is all about - Praising and thanking
our Lord and sharing time with family
and friends.
Good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Christmas is a happy time!
Listen to those church bells chime!
Come, worship His Majesty!
Let us unite--affably.
what a bright, cheery poem, Nicole -
your words describing what Christmas
is all about - Praising and thanking
our Lord and sharing time with family
and friends.
Good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you, Margaret.
Nicole
Comment from bcwoods
Overall I think the poem is good. SI thought the poem was a little misleading. As I read it, it reminded me more of the Resurrection than the Birth of Christ. I was expecting more about the meaning of Christmas, but I did enjoy the poem.
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Overall I think the poem is good. SI thought the poem was a little misleading. As I read it, it reminded me more of the Resurrection than the Birth of Christ. I was expecting more about the meaning of Christmas, but I did enjoy the poem.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you for 4 stars. Glad to catch you on a generous day.
Comment from randman58
Nice piece, god sentiments. Rhymes and flows pretty well. You lose me a little with "the end is ever near " line, but that's just me. great finish with the last two lines.
Merry Christmas to you too! Well done.
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Nice piece, god sentiments. Rhymes and flows pretty well. You lose me a little with "the end is ever near " line, but that's just me. great finish with the last two lines.
Merry Christmas to you too! Well done.
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
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Yes, it is just you. Every day people meet God. Be prepared, stay mindful. Thank you for 4 stars. Glad to catch you on a generous day.
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Truly sorry if I offended, not my intent. It's just such a joyous uplifting piece until that line. Don't go by what I say I'm just a hack.
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Truly sorry if I offended, not my intent. It's just such a joyous uplifting piece until that line. Don't go by what I say I'm just a hack.
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
CurlyGirly,
I am used to your name being associated with all your wonderful fanart. So I was a little stunned to see you writing. I adore your Christmas poem. It is perfect. Best wishes in the Christmas poetry contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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CurlyGirly,
I am used to your name being associated with all your wonderful fanart. So I was a little stunned to see you writing. I adore your Christmas poem. It is perfect. Best wishes in the Christmas poetry contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you for reading.
CG
Comment from Zue65
Thanks for sharing this excellent poem exploring the joy, blessings and good cheer associated with the holiday seasons. I may not celebrate this festival anymore having known its pagan origin but I won't forget that Christ should be the center of all these. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thanks for sharing this excellent poem exploring the joy, blessings and good cheer associated with the holiday seasons. I may not celebrate this festival anymore having known its pagan origin but I won't forget that Christ should be the center of all these. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from rspoet
This is a very fine Christmas story
in a well rhymed poem
The true meaning of Christmas
often lost in day's hectic season
Beautiful photograph to match your poem
Nicely written
and a Merry Christmas to all
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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This is a very fine Christmas story
in a well rhymed poem
The true meaning of Christmas
often lost in day's hectic season
Beautiful photograph to match your poem
Nicely written
and a Merry Christmas to all
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you for your respectful review.
Nicole
Comment from Jacq77
I absolutely loved this happy, feel-good poem, which left me looking forward to the coming Christmas, where we celebrate the birth of Christ our Saviour. This is very well worded, with excellent rhythm and flow. I am grateful that we are still free to worship in the country I live, although feel sadness for those who are not in some countries around the world. Your choice of artwork was perfect for this poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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I absolutely loved this happy, feel-good poem, which left me looking forward to the coming Christmas, where we celebrate the birth of Christ our Saviour. This is very well worded, with excellent rhythm and flow. I am grateful that we are still free to worship in the country I live, although feel sadness for those who are not in some countries around the world. Your choice of artwork was perfect for this poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you for your respectful and kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
Christmas is a time to worship the Christ King; a time to better ourselves. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
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Christmas is a time to worship the Christ King; a time to better ourselves. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you, Charlie.
Nicole
Comment from PoemsOfDD
A fine Christmas Poetry contest entry. It was quite uplifting and very joyous. It describes well the festive cheer and God's delight. A very enjoyable read indeed. Well done and good luck in the competition.
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A fine Christmas Poetry contest entry. It was quite uplifting and very joyous. It describes well the festive cheer and God's delight. A very enjoyable read indeed. Well done and good luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you for your respectful and kind review.
