Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Missy

- Indeed, don't know how or why, but just a word can do IT -- or a look. (*<*)
_ Beautifully penned and presented with a stunning piece of artwork.
_ Good stuff for us 'romantics.'

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015

Thank you to all of you, Jacqueline~Jackie~ Jax. :)

I am indeed smiling :)

Missy

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 19-Nov-2015

Some people will NOT refer to me as Jax, not even Jackie, just Jacqueline, so why not sign off on all three? LOL

My dad called me: Jacksy--I reserve that one for just 'moi'. (*<*)

Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr

Excellent

Hello there to my good friend. This was another powerfully romantic poem, it certainly speaks to the soul. Very nice and blessed is the one for whom it was first intended. Loyd

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015

Hello, Loyd, I am delighted that you enjoyed my poem. It was written with my heart but alas unrequited, if the truth be known. lol.

Thank you again,
Missy

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 19-Nov-2015

Now that's a shame. It seems that you have so much to give and are so enriched with the beauty of life which is easily recognized in your poetry. I am sure you spoke to and for someone. My best to you. Loyd

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi...well this hit home for me. my partner just found a bunch of peoms I wrote when we lived in different countries(it was a hard 3 years)...and I remeber listening to her answer phone just to hear her voice when I was heartsore. i know this is not what your poem is about...but it did spark that memory.
padumachitta

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015

P, that is exactly what my poem is about. Love. Yours sounds as if this poem was written for you. I am delighted it stirred a memory for you, sweetie :)

Missy

Comment from scongrove

Excellent

Love, love the photo! Goes perfect with your words. Yes, I have felt this. Sometimes all it takes is that single word to make your heart flutter and feel like it's going to beat out of your chest. I miss that. Haven't felt that in a long time, but will always remember how it made me feel.
Thanks for bringing that memory to me. I always enjoy reading how you put words together that is so heartfelt. I can tell you write from your heart.
Shana :)

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015

Shana, I am so happy you found this to your liking :)
Memories are sometimes all we have and other times...they fuel each step we take.

Hugs,
Missy

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

Okay, Missy, my detective instincts tell me there may be a certain someone "across the pond" that is causing your heart to race with mere words. Hmmm....a fellow FanStorian?

Good poem--love the physical lay out--makes for a dramatic ending. Well done!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015

LOL G, I do have heartstrings that get pulled :) Your detective skills are spot on but...put them away...lmao. Scary stuff..lol.

Thanks for the smile you gave me and the lovely review, Detective :)

Missy

reply by Green Lake Girl on 19-Nov-2015

Now I'm even more intrigued!

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is a sweet declaration of love that anyone would be thrilled to receive. As well as being beautifully expressed it is thoughtfully presented in cursive script, with the short lines getting shorter until the point of this stiletto plunges into the heart of the targeted one like Cupid's arrow.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015

Hiya, Gynt, I am pleased as punch that you enjoyed this work from me. :)
Thank you for the very kind review as well.

Always,
Missy

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

My 'heart races' at strolling speed nowadays, Missy, and if it ever got into second gear, I'd worry about the consequences. LOL.

Anyway, you express the powerful effect a special writer - or absent lover - has on you, extremely well.

Best wishes, Ray xx

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015

Thank you, Ray.
Don't do any strenuous activity sugga. Wouldn't want you collapsing and disappearing from my life here in FanStory :)

Missy

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

I do understand that feelings you experience from a special one that can make your heart racing like a horse even before you open the text message that special one send.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015

Hi, Sandra, thanks for the lovely review. Sometimes we wonder if what we write will touch another. I am delighted when I see one of mine has.

Missy

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

I don't know, Missy, it sounds pretty autobiographical to me. What aren't you telling us here? LOL, it does seem like the poem's protagonist is on the short end here, and I'm wondering if he is waiting as breathlessly as she.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015

Now, now, Jay. A lady doesn't kiss and tell. LOL.

Thanks for the sweet and entertaining review hon.

Missy

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello Justafan :)

I love your poem. It is so romantic.... it reminds me of that special someone I had in my life. We are no longer together but I don't think I will ever forget that feeling. Great presentation. Awesome free verse style and delightful flow. Good job!
Gypsy

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015

When we touch someone with our work it is the highest compliment. Thank you sweetie.

Missy