Comment from Leineco

Excellent

Slowly, but surely, they DO putrefy (as we Walking Dead fans can testify! LOL

Nicely done :-)

I kinda like the 1st & 3rd lines reversed though

rare vicious virus
soulless bag of bones eats brains
putrid cadaver

but that's just a thought ;-)

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Hello my friend, it is good to meet another Walking Dead fan, I love horror in general but I really like zombie movies. Thank you! I appreciate the awesome review and kind words. :)

Comment from Sueswrite

Excellent

Quite an imagination! This is a great 5-7-5 based on horror and the images that you used were fantastic. Your lines ran smooth with no wonder of meaning! Best of luck to you in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Thank you! I appreciate the awesome review and kind words. :)

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

What I love about this poem is the way "rare"
can be applied to the brains or
or the virus. This is an excellent 5-7-5
and should do well in the contest.
Good luck.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Thank you, I really appreciate your awesome review. :)

Comment from evilynne

Exceptional

Yech - three scary gory lines to make us cringe; the illustrations terrifyingly fit the words well,also. Best of luck in the contest! Evi

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Thank you so much for the awesome review, Evi :) I am grateful for the six stars and kind words.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Loved the presentation for this (obviously, heh-heh), but the wording is descriptive too. Adjectives like "putrid", "soulless", and "vicious", really help to make this message hit dead on. No pun intended.
Best of luck to you in the voting booths.
~Dean

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Thank you very much "H" :) I really appreciate your review and kind words. :)

reply by Dean Kuch on 18-Nov-2015

My pleasure, good luck. :}

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Ick - what a disgusting poem, LOL. Seriously, you did a good job with the horror short, short. The image you chose is equally gross. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Thank you very much Louise, I appreciate your review and kind words :)

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Whack, this is horror and horror at it's worse. I think you have caught this sentiment of horrific events that is true horror and a terrible threat to mankind. All best in the contest. Ulla

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellet review. :)

Comment from Christof McTarnahan

Excellent

This was more fun than an open casket funeral. I was honored to be splashed with your literary gore.Bleed on my friend, bleed on.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellet review. :)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This follows the desired 5-7-5 format correctly. Each line contains horrific material. The result is that this can quite correctly be classed as a 5-7-5 Horror entry for this contest. Need I say more? Probably not.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellet review. :)

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Wow...that is a mighty strong image...image of images.
Even so, I take my hat of too you for the words hold their own.
A striking presentation indeed.
Best wishes,
RGstar

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellet review. :)