I'll Get Some Rest
Exercise can be deadly.17 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Ha! That is too funny Lance!
I feel that way just getting out of bed in the morning lol!
fun, whimsical piece!
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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Ha! That is too funny Lance!
I feel that way just getting out of bed in the morning lol!
fun, whimsical piece!
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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Me too. Thanks. Have a great day. Give LaDonna a hug for us.
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Will do!
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Will do!
Comment from Rubylou
Funny, cute, and oh, so relatable! LOl
Great flow in this light-hearted view of exercise. You gave me a few chuckles.
The image is perfect for your words.
Rubylou
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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Funny, cute, and oh, so relatable! LOl
Great flow in this light-hearted view of exercise. You gave me a few chuckles.
The image is perfect for your words.
Rubylou
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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Ruby. Thanks for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. God bless.
Comment from Cletus Hardiman
This is a very cute way to get the message out to everyone that we need to exercise regularly. But, we need to never push it too far! LOL ( especially me ) Cletus Hardiman
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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This is a very cute way to get the message out to everyone that we need to exercise regularly. But, we need to never push it too far! LOL ( especially me ) Cletus Hardiman
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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Lol. Thank you Cletus for the review and understanding. God bless.
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You are welcome for the review! Take care! Clete
Comment from AnnaLinda
Lance,
That's funny! I like your sense of humor here and "log rolls?" lol
You around the bases baseball theme worked well for your little piece.
What a hysterical picture to with it too. I heard a melody in those nicely
rhymed lines.
Please, not that kind of rest.
Thank you for sharing this!
Linda
(in your author notes you have "right" instead of 'write.'
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Lance,
That's funny! I like your sense of humor here and "log rolls?" lol
You around the bases baseball theme worked well for your little piece.
What a hysterical picture to with it too. I heard a melody in those nicely
rhymed lines.
Please, not that kind of rest.
Thank you for sharing this!
Linda
(in your author notes you have "right" instead of 'write.'
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Thanks. I'll fix it. Thanks for the review. God bless.
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of course...gave me a smile...I even read it to my husband...hehe
Comment from MizKat
Oh Lance,
This is a darling poem that I really enjoyed reading. The last verse had me laughing out loud, especially the last line. You are a great poet and I'm glad that we've started to be a fan of each other since FanStory sends your work to me and mine to you. The picture you put up with your poem is cute too.
Kat
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Oh Lance,
This is a darling poem that I really enjoyed reading. The last verse had me laughing out loud, especially the last line. You are a great poet and I'm glad that we've started to be a fan of each other since FanStory sends your work to me and mine to you. The picture you put up with your poem is cute too.
Kat
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Thanks Kat. I greatly appreciate it and your friendship. God bless.
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I appreciate your friendship too. Kat
Comment from Teri7
This poem was so cute but yet down to earth as well. I have to be careful when I exercise due to the MS. I lose my balance and fall face forward at times or sideways. Great little poem. It made me smile. hugs, Teri
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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This poem was so cute but yet down to earth as well. I have to be careful when I exercise due to the MS. I lose my balance and fall face forward at times or sideways. Great little poem. It made me smile. hugs, Teri
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Teri. Thanks for the kind review. Be careful but continue to get some exercise. God bless.
Comment from GracieAnn
LanceHill,
I enjoyed the ironic humor and the play on the word gain. It speaks of a universal dieting struggle making the issue not so miserable that the funny side can't be explored. Nice rhyming scheme. :0 GracieAnn
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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LanceHill,
I enjoyed the ironic humor and the play on the word gain. It speaks of a universal dieting struggle making the issue not so miserable that the funny side can't be explored. Nice rhyming scheme. :0 GracieAnn
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Gracie. Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. God bless.