Poems
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Comment from chocoletdrop052
Memories are long lasting and desirable for the heart. It trails from the birth unto death. However, when we give ear to a broken heart, the love that was left will soon depart. Thanks
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Memories are long lasting and desirable for the heart. It trails from the birth unto death. However, when we give ear to a broken heart, the love that was left will soon depart. Thanks
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Thank you, Karen, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from robina1978
A lovely photo of a wilting flower that complements your poem perfectly. Her perfume stays, our memory stays too. What departs...remains with us. Thanks for sharing.
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A lovely photo of a wilting flower that complements your poem perfectly. Her perfume stays, our memory stays too. What departs...remains with us. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
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Thank you, Ine, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from royowen
A nicely written Bill, beautifully expressed in elegant and articulate language, I've read a few a tankas today, and this one is a corker my friend, well done, blessings, Roy
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A nicely written Bill, beautifully expressed in elegant and articulate language, I've read a few a tankas today, and this one is a corker my friend, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
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Thank you, Roy, for the kind review. Bill
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Most welcome Bill
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very powerful and well stated, Bill. Your economy of words were perfectly chosen for this particular write.
I can certainly relate...
Good work.
With respect
~Dean
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Very powerful and well stated, Bill. Your economy of words were perfectly chosen for this particular write.
I can certainly relate...
Good work.
With respect
~Dean
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Thank you, Dean, for the kind, encouraging, and exceptional review. I appreciate your giving this such a positive assessment. Bill
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You're very welcome, Bill. It's well deserved in my opinion.
~Dean
Comment from Sambangi
Last line sums up the poem. What ever leaves us, leaves some mark in our memory which stays with us. Beautiful tanka, I liked it
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Last line sums up the poem. What ever leaves us, leaves some mark in our memory which stays with us. Beautiful tanka, I liked it
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
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Thank you, Sambangi, for giving this a look. Bill