Christine's Poems
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A nursery rhyme with quite a different feel. A bit sad with the frown and giving the children a fright and ran away instead of playing. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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A nursery rhyme with quite a different feel. A bit sad with the frown and giving the children a fright and ran away instead of playing. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Thank you Sandra for your excellent rating and review for Old Man Brown's Hat just having fun trying a new style appreciate you comments and good luck wishes Cheers
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
I enjoyed this nursery rhyme poem. The flow made it an easy read. I liked the internal rhymes with a few of its lines. Very descriptive about old man Brown. We had our own Mr Brown. His name was Walt. Never knew where he lived, most thought up under the viaduct on the lesser used road. I wish you great luck in this contest. Well done! Jim
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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I enjoyed this nursery rhyme poem. The flow made it an easy read. I liked the internal rhymes with a few of its lines. Very descriptive about old man Brown. We had our own Mr Brown. His name was Walt. Never knew where he lived, most thought up under the viaduct on the lesser used road. I wish you great luck in this contest. Well done! Jim
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Thanks Jim whatca great review for my fisrt tome NR had a bit of fun with Old Man Brown so did your have a hat lol good to hear from you Cheers
Comment from Ricky1024
review for the arm nursery rhyme in poem contest titled old man Brown and I written written by the anonymous writer cuz there's a contest first attempt at a nursery rhyme I'm very quaint and enjoyable sweet simple with the hat being the major part of the character good luck with this Ricky 1024
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review for the arm nursery rhyme in poem contest titled old man Brown and I written written by the anonymous writer cuz there's a contest first attempt at a nursery rhyme I'm very quaint and enjoyable sweet simple with the hat being the major part of the character good luck with this Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much Ricky1024 for your great review and I am glad you saw the hat as the focus as I have just changed the title to Old Man Brown' Hat a few minutes before I read your review so appreciate your time and comments Cheers