Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

From reading the prompt, it looks like your Tyburn poem is written correctly.
It's a great one for Halloween.

Good luck in the contest.
:) e

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015

Thank you barking dog, for your great review, but I have had another look at the prompt and I think all the descriptive words have to rhyme and on further reading I dont think these ones do so having a bit of a tweek, but appreciate your support Cheers

reply by barkingdog on 25-Oct-2015

Then, I guess I'm wrong thinking that ing makes them rhyme.

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015

Hi not sure I thing the actual words have to rhyme ie trick and treat don't rhyme so I may have to think again watch this space lol