Our Love
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Comment from Joan E.
I was good to see your name pop up on my screen and to learn the delightful news of your engagement to a FanStorian. I enjoyed your lyrics and your random rhymes. Here's to love! -Joan
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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I was good to see your name pop up on my screen and to learn the delightful news of your engagement to a FanStorian. I enjoyed your lyrics and your random rhymes. Here's to love! -Joan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Thank you Joan!
Comment from CarriesMeAway
The repetition of "love" is slightly heavy-handed and the intentional/unintentional no punctuation limited my interpretation of this piece and the voice that usually comes along with poetry. The slight metaphor between the Holy Trinity of God and this persona who has come to find a love like this is beautiful and delivered well.
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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The repetition of "love" is slightly heavy-handed and the intentional/unintentional no punctuation limited my interpretation of this piece and the voice that usually comes along with poetry. The slight metaphor between the Holy Trinity of God and this persona who has come to find a love like this is beautiful and delivered well.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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thanks for your thoughts
Comment from Sasha
Congratulations to both of you. I found this poem deeply moving and awesomely uplifting and so positive. Excellent work with this and I wish both of you all the best.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Congratulations to both of you. I found this poem deeply moving and awesomely uplifting and so positive. Excellent work with this and I wish both of you all the best.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Thanks!
Comment from Jean Lutz
Congratulations to both of you. I've known you for years and know this is well deserved. May this sweet melody last forever. Blossoms that budded in the Fanstory garden. I especially like line number six "We're a three strand chord entwined".
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2015
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Congratulations to both of you. I've known you for years and know this is well deserved. May this sweet melody last forever. Blossoms that budded in the Fanstory garden. I especially like line number six "We're a three strand chord entwined".
Comment Written 21-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2015
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God bless you, Jean. Thanks
Comment from I am Cat
Well, you little Jewell you... Happy Happy Joy Joy! ;)
Good for you! i'm really pleased for you. :)
And it's really nice to see you back here!
I loved your song lyrics, are you going to sing it for us? :)
loved this part especially:
Not half of me or half of you
Combined to make a whole
But all of me for all of you
From deep down in our souls
The eyes of my heart had seen you
Far before we ever met
I knew your fire I felt desire
My heart for you I kept
just beautiful!
Congratulations and stay awhile, will you? ;)
Cat
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2015
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Well, you little Jewell you... Happy Happy Joy Joy! ;)
Good for you! i'm really pleased for you. :)
And it's really nice to see you back here!
I loved your song lyrics, are you going to sing it for us? :)
loved this part especially:
Not half of me or half of you
Combined to make a whole
But all of me for all of you
From deep down in our souls
The eyes of my heart had seen you
Far before we ever met
I knew your fire I felt desire
My heart for you I kept
just beautiful!
Congratulations and stay awhile, will you? ;)
Cat
Comment Written 21-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2015
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Thank you Cat! I will be back now and then...
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Glad to hear it... good luck to you! and congratulations!
Comment from gamay
Hello Maa'm.
This very nice poem you written.
I really enjoyed it very much.
Thanks for sharing us.
Have a nice day to you.
gamay
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2015
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Hello Maa'm.
This very nice poem you written.
I really enjoyed it very much.
Thanks for sharing us.
Have a nice day to you.
gamay
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2015
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Thanks!