2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "haiku(soaked earth smells like rain)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
70 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
I love it and the way you set this poem up, the picture and poem blend into one piece. Congrats on the win. I wish I had a six. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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I love it and the way you set this poem up, the picture and poem blend into one piece. Congrats on the win. I wish I had a six. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy
Comment from nomi338
Please allow me to just say that this is a truism that has existed for me almost all the days of my life. The smell of a recent rain, freshly mown grass, flowers in bloom, etc. This is a clear indication of God's love for man. Only a loving creator would and could give us such wonderful gifts for free. We spend much money for expensive perfumes and colognes while the best scents are ours for free. This is a wonderful reminder, given to us for free.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Please allow me to just say that this is a truism that has existed for me almost all the days of my life. The smell of a recent rain, freshly mown grass, flowers in bloom, etc. This is a clear indication of God's love for man. Only a loving creator would and could give us such wonderful gifts for free. We spend much money for expensive perfumes and colognes while the best scents are ours for free. This is a wonderful reminder, given to us for free.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A thoroughly happy haiku, Gypsy. You personified the rainbow by making it "peek", but you are forgiven in light of the delight your poem brings this reader. Great job! :) Nancy
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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A thoroughly happy haiku, Gypsy. You personified the rainbow by making it "peek", but you are forgiven in light of the delight your poem brings this reader. Great job! :) Nancy
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy
Comment from ellie6
There is nothing in the world like the smell of earth after rain. Your poem epitomises that sentiment. Your choice of colours is unique, it caught my eye and made me want to read the poem.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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There is nothing in the world like the smell of earth after rain. Your poem epitomises that sentiment. Your choice of colours is unique, it caught my eye and made me want to read the poem.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi GBR - as I was reading this and admiring the layout, I thought this has to be a winner - then as I scrolled down I see it is. Very well done - gorgeous layout with the rainbow colours. Congratulations - Dorothy xxx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Hi GBR - as I was reading this and admiring the layout, I thought this has to be a winner - then as I scrolled down I see it is. Very well done - gorgeous layout with the rainbow colours. Congratulations - Dorothy xxx
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy
Comment from TAB_that's me
Wow! Great imagery in your haiku. I like the rainbow formatting too. Congratulations on your win Gypsy! Well deserved.
teresa
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Wow! Great imagery in your haiku. I like the rainbow formatting too. Congratulations on your win Gypsy! Well deserved.
teresa
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy
Comment from Alan K Pease
Your haiku (soaked earth smell like rain) fits the constraints of this form of poetry (with satori) perfectly. The colored words add to its form superbly. Congratulation on your win. It is well deserved.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Your haiku (soaked earth smell like rain) fits the constraints of this form of poetry (with satori) perfectly. The colored words add to its form superbly. Congratulation on your win. It is well deserved.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :) Thank you for the six stars :)
~Gypsy
Comment from TomyKan
A beautiful poem about a rainbow. The use of rainbow colors within the poem is very effective, making this a very artistic and stunning presentation. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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A beautiful poem about a rainbow. The use of rainbow colors within the poem is very effective, making this a very artistic and stunning presentation. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy
Comment from Nosha17
Nice simple message which epitomises the lovely effects the rainbow has on the world. Well chosen words and congratulations on your win. faye
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Nice simple message which epitomises the lovely effects the rainbow has on the world. Well chosen words and congratulations on your win. faye
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy
Comment from barkingdog
Hi, gypsy.
This is so beautiful. It looks and reads like a poster that could hang on the wall, or it could be a plaque for a desk.
-nice 'l' consonance: smells like/clouds/child smiles
-good 's' consonance: soaked/smells/peeks
Congratulations on your first place win in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Hi, gypsy.
This is so beautiful. It looks and reads like a poster that could hang on the wall, or it could be a plaque for a desk.
-nice 'l' consonance: smells like/clouds/child smiles
-good 's' consonance: soaked/smells/peeks
Congratulations on your first place win in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy