Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Aware of life's beauty"Words to pass on to my children
15 total reviews
Comment from ronnie k
WE are all made of stardust" yes one creator, you do an excellent job describing the fragile and so valuable gift of life, thanks for sharing,ronnie k
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
WE are all made of stardust" yes one creator, you do an excellent job describing the fragile and so valuable gift of life, thanks for sharing,ronnie k
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thanks ronnie for your nice review.
Comment from Beejay
Your work I thought demonstrated great authenticity. Your words were very visionary and creative and brought as fragrant clarity to the verses.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
Your work I thought demonstrated great authenticity. Your words were very visionary and creative and brought as fragrant clarity to the verses.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thank you for your most encouraging review I really appreciate.
Comment from papa55mike
I love the picture and how it blends in with the poem. We are connected with all things made by God. Very well written. I wish I had a six.
Have a great day and God bless, mike.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
I love the picture and how it blends in with the poem. We are connected with all things made by God. Very well written. I wish I had a six.
Have a great day and God bless, mike.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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I am so happy with your excellent review and the virtual six very encouraging. Thanks.
Comment from Sambangi
Excellent entry to the contest, magic of life espoused in very few lines. We are here to observe nature's beauty... a message to many who in the business of moneymaking forget what nature offers us
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
Excellent entry to the contest, magic of life espoused in very few lines. We are here to observe nature's beauty... a message to many who in the business of moneymaking forget what nature offers us
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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I am really glad your like my entry into this particular contest, I appreciate your encouraging review.
Comment from Curly Girly
There appears to be fine words of encouragement within the lines of this poem.
Your title: Aware of lifes beauty
Suggest: Aware of life's beauty / apostrophe in: life's
CG
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
There appears to be fine words of encouragement within the lines of this poem.
Your title: Aware of lifes beauty
Suggest: Aware of life's beauty / apostrophe in: life's
CG
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thanks for your encouraging review. I forgot to change the title so thanks for the reminder.