Short Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Eagle to Penguin: You Can't Fly"A Collection Of Short Form Poetry
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Comment from humpwhistle
I'm guessing I'm overthinking this. I got hung up on the implication that eagles don't participate. I can't reconcile that on face value, so looked for another explanation. The only explanation that works for me has to do with the enmity military grunts have for elite pilots.
Far flung, eh?
It might help me to know how penguins participate more than eagles. Life is not participation-optional. Hunt-Eat-Breed-Rear.
Peace, Lee
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I'm guessing I'm overthinking this. I got hung up on the implication that eagles don't participate. I can't reconcile that on face value, so looked for another explanation. The only explanation that works for me has to do with the enmity military grunts have for elite pilots.
Far flung, eh?
It might help me to know how penguins participate more than eagles. Life is not participation-optional. Hunt-Eat-Breed-Rear.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
Comment from papa55mike
That is amazing. I love the way you set it up with both pictures and the title in the middle. I love the humor at the end. Good luck in the contest. Have a great Sunday and God bless, mike.
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That is amazing. I love the way you set it up with both pictures and the title in the middle. I love the humor at the end. Good luck in the contest. Have a great Sunday and God bless, mike.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
Comment from Domino 2
The obvious presentation must be from only a few members, but it IS stunning.
Very sneaky and clever to have the title as 'part' of the poem - but no rules broken... I THINK.
Hmm...I need to make a note and try that one. Well, I would if I had the technical ability. :-)
Original and effective dialogue in a 'shortie'.
TOP contender and will certainly take a lot of beating - see, I can be gracious as well as jealous. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
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The obvious presentation must be from only a few members, but it IS stunning.
Very sneaky and clever to have the title as 'part' of the poem - but no rules broken... I THINK.
Hmm...I need to make a note and try that one. Well, I would if I had the technical ability. :-)
Original and effective dialogue in a 'shortie'.
TOP contender and will certainly take a lot of beating - see, I can be gracious as well as jealous. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
Comment from dmt1967
I like that. It is like the saying participating is better than looking on and criticising. This is my take on, those who do do, and those that can't teach. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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I like that. It is like the saying participating is better than looking on and criticising. This is my take on, those who do do, and those that can't teach. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
Comment from Nosha17
Cute message from those cheeky penguins to that big bold eagle. Good touch of humour and well chosen words. Love the illustration. Good luck in the contest. Faye
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Cute message from those cheeky penguins to that big bold eagle. Good touch of humour and well chosen words. Love the illustration. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
Comment from Eric1
Hi mystery author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, Excellent use of words with a brilliant response, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
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Hi mystery author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, Excellent use of words with a brilliant response, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2015