Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine senryu for the contest on Yourself
The syllables are exact at 5-7-5
Nice little play on words with the muse
Many hear will relate to brains on overdrive
Excellent art work to match the poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thank you rspoet for your great feedback and good wishes. so much appreciated Cheers can only have a go lol

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thank you rspoet for your great feedback and good wishes. so much appreciated Cheers can only have a go lol

Comment from jclark

Excellent

Great contest entry. Your picture choice is original and well suited to your perfectly executed Senryu. Best of luck in the contest. This is definitely a contender. Kindly, Judy

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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thank you Judy for you great review and comments. glad you liked it and thanks for the vote of confidence Cheers

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)

This is a funny senryu making fun of yourself. My kids make fun of me too but it is all good. Nice job with the syllable count and clever satori. Well done!
~gypsy

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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thank you Gypsy for reading and reviewing this entry, never take myself seriously life is too short for that anyway. I the lighter side of life and a bit of a challenge. withThanks and Cheers