Short Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "haiku (butterfly gently ripples)"A Collection Of Short Form Poetry
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Comment from rspoet
This is a very nice six word poem
The butterfly effect in tiny ripples
on the reflected images of the moon
Very nicely presented
with gorgeous picture and matching font
in the blue moon light
Well done
Good luck
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This is a very nice six word poem
The butterfly effect in tiny ripples
on the reflected images of the moon
Very nicely presented
with gorgeous picture and matching font
in the blue moon light
Well done
Good luck
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
Comment from c_lucas
Syllable counts are meaningless in some forms of short poetry. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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Syllable counts are meaningless in some forms of short poetry. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
Comment from anabellapongasi
Beautiful! Very well chosen six words to compose this one- line haiku. The artwork and lovely presentation really enhanced this very creative piece. Best of luck in the contest with this strong entry.
Blessings,
Anabella
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Beautiful! Very well chosen six words to compose this one- line haiku. The artwork and lovely presentation really enhanced this very creative piece. Best of luck in the contest with this strong entry.
Blessings,
Anabella
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
Comment from thebluestar
~Wow, what a delight for the senses. I love the simplicity of your words, and yet together they could tell a story of larger proportions, if only in the imagination. Well done, Annette
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~Wow, what a delight for the senses. I love the simplicity of your words, and yet together they could tell a story of larger proportions, if only in the imagination. Well done, Annette
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
Comment from Domino 2
Excellent artwork choice and colour presentation, mystery writer.
Excellent whimsy imagery, and multi-syllable word choices for extra flow in this thought-provoking write.
Maybe edit to centralise the words better.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
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Excellent artwork choice and colour presentation, mystery writer.
Excellent whimsy imagery, and multi-syllable word choices for extra flow in this thought-provoking write.
Maybe edit to centralise the words better.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, excellent imagery presented in the one like haiku format, I love the picture you put with it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, excellent imagery presented in the one like haiku format, I love the picture you put with it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
Comment from Nosha17
Nice imagery of the butterfly connecting with the wonders of the Universe. Well chosen words and imagery. Great illustration, good luck in the contest. Faye
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Nice imagery of the butterfly connecting with the wonders of the Universe. Well chosen words and imagery. Great illustration, good luck in the contest. Faye
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2015