Comment from JanPerry

Excellent

Stands a good chance of winning. I will check the winners of the nonet contest later, as I had an entry but was too late to put it in.
I like the lines, and it comes together nicely describing the artist as having an eye for the colours of Autumn.
Good luck.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thanks Jan for a very encouraging review, I appreciate your comments. Pity you were too late for the contest.

Comment from Sylvia Page

Excellent

Hi,
This nonet is spot on in syllable count. Appropriately written and conforms to all the rules. It also brings out the changes from one season to the next. Well done! My best wishes in winning the contest.
Olivia

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thanks for the excellent review and best wishes for the contestI really appreciate it.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

A good subject for your Nonet, which is constructed with the correct syllable count and enhanced by occasional end rhyme. I wondered if it might be worth considering an alternative to 'new' in either the second or the fourth line. 'Fresh hue' perhaps. Hew/hue. The 'last days of summer brings (bring) changes'. Minor points worth looking at for the contest. I like the connection between the poet and the season. An enjoyable read.

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thanks I agree with your suggestions , I appreciate your review.