Comment from doggymad

Excellent

I enjoyed this quirky work. I had to read it twice to get the twist at the end. A definite deja vu moment. Ben will get plenty of iron in his system lol

Freda

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015

Thank you, Freda, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

LOL! You have a very unusual mind, Bill, but I like this. It's original, different for a change from the same old plots. Delightfully weird. :)

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015

Thank you, Phyllis, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

okay, remind me not to have dinner at your house, you may leave some of those razors in the ribeye, medium rare. I want the blood in my meat, not in my gut, lol. I enjoyed reading this one.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015

Thank you for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from anabellapongasi

Excellent

OMG! This left me speechless! I don't know what to say :) Very shockingly creative, I mean, what a horror you have written here. I am impressed with the writer's skill in weaving such a good short horror flash fiction Well done.
Blessings,
Anabella

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015

Thank you, Anabella, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from LeannaP

Excellent

Hi Bill!
interesting and fine read you have here.
I like how you used the word, "Zertainly"!
You have a very creative and unique mind
and it shows through in your writing.
I might be lost but why the apple photo
for this particular piece?
Nevertheless, fantastic read.
Leanna

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 Comment Written 04-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015

Thank you, Leanna, for the excellent review. In my haste to leave this morning I went to Fanart for a razor picture and settled for this one. Perhaps the apple makes eating understood and the entire picture seems eerie. Bill

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I was confused the first time through. I had to go back and re-read it a second time to really get the jist of this. Still a bit confusing but I think I see what you're trying to do.

I thought the doctors European accent was done pretty well.

John

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 Comment Written 04-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015

Thank you, John, for the excellent review. Essentially, the nut has swallowed a bunch of razor blades and has been practicing the expected conversation he'd be having with his doctor. Part of that actual conversation ends the story. Bill