Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Making the Most of Moment"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
42 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a nice spiritual poem with a good and strong message.
The picture is lovely and a good match to the poem.
Well rhymed, well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
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This is a nice spiritual poem with a good and strong message.
The picture is lovely and a good match to the poem.
Well rhymed, well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for your encouraging and positive review, I really appreciate your assessments.
Comment from royowen
There is some marvellous advice given in this lovely rhymed quatrain poem. There are many scriptures woven into this fabulous mixed meter quatrained sweet morsel for the wisdom of the ages to add to one's Arsenal of protection. Well done, beautifully written in rhyme and near rhyme quatrains, well dine, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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There is some marvellous advice given in this lovely rhymed quatrain poem. There are many scriptures woven into this fabulous mixed meter quatrained sweet morsel for the wisdom of the ages to add to one's Arsenal of protection. Well done, beautifully written in rhyme and near rhyme quatrains, well dine, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for the wonderful description of my poem.it is very precious to me and I treasure it very much.
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Well done
Comment from rama devi
this is lucidly delivered and conveys a great positive message. Fine rhymes and slant rhymes. Excellent alliteration (espcially in the opening line). Overall, an uplifting write but the flow can be improved by accurate punctuation (and note one typo)...
NOTES:
*Making the most of the moment makes a masterpiece,(no comma)
much to be desired, and it'll put your heart at ease.
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What more is there to be desired than life lived in happiness,(?)
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Don't let this blessed moment pass away, M(m)y dear,
for there are wondrous riches to be found in the silence of a prayer!
(I applaud the slant rhyme of prayer and dear!)
Well voice idealistic closing note:
It is best to just be joyful, letting gladness fill your heart
instead of facing disarray as your morning falls apart.
Enjoyed.
Smiling,
rd
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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this is lucidly delivered and conveys a great positive message. Fine rhymes and slant rhymes. Excellent alliteration (espcially in the opening line). Overall, an uplifting write but the flow can be improved by accurate punctuation (and note one typo)...
NOTES:
*Making the most of the moment makes a masterpiece,(no comma)
much to be desired, and it'll put your heart at ease.
*
What more is there to be desired than life lived in happiness,(?)
*
Don't let this blessed moment pass away, M(m)y dear,
for there are wondrous riches to be found in the silence of a prayer!
(I applaud the slant rhyme of prayer and dear!)
Well voice idealistic closing note:
It is best to just be joyful, letting gladness fill your heart
instead of facing disarray as your morning falls apart.
Enjoyed.
Smiling,
rd
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for your fabulous review and for your helpful assessment of my poem. Its greatly appreciated.
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:-))))
Comment from robyn corum
G,
What a bright and hopeful, inspiring message! I think it would do so many people well to read this every morning before they go about their day's business. Lovely job! I look forward to more! Thanks
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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G,
What a bright and hopeful, inspiring message! I think it would do so many people well to read this every morning before they go about their day's business. Lovely job! I look forward to more! Thanks
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thank you for this fabulous review, it's such a blessing to have something encouraging to give people to read, something that will help them through life. What a joy. With much kindness. Gb
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks making the most of moment and focussing on the things that make one wise battling mind with the truths and not filled with confusions and live life most in happiness; I liked.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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This speaks making the most of moment and focussing on the things that make one wise battling mind with the truths and not filled with confusions and live life most in happiness; I liked.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for your helpful and encouraging review, I really appreciate it. Sincerely Gb.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you so much for sharing your joyous poem about relaxing and enjoying life, rather than dwelling on the negative. Your words ring so true - I love my mornings of prayer and praise - a great way to start the day,
~patty~
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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thank you so much for sharing your joyous poem about relaxing and enjoying life, rather than dwelling on the negative. Your words ring so true - I love my mornings of prayer and praise - a great way to start the day,
~patty~
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your great review, it is encouraging to read it your review.
Comment from sharonlshelley
love this poem i feel like i am in the picture, i feel sad and happy at the same time
but also making you feel greatful for today, thanks for sharing Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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love this poem i feel like i am in the picture, i feel sad and happy at the same time
but also making you feel greatful for today, thanks for sharing Sharon
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your very helpful review. I really appreciate it. Wish you all the best in your pursuit to help people. It is really admirable.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your poem "Making the most of Moment". You rhymed it well except of lines one and two in the first stanza. You may wish to review this. Also did you meant to put 'the moment in your title. You chose a beautiful picture.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed reading your poem "Making the most of Moment". You rhymed it well except of lines one and two in the first stanza. You may wish to review this. Also did you meant to put 'the moment in your title. You chose a beautiful picture.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to assess my poem and for your helpful comments on it. I'll gladly consider them.
With appreciation, Gb
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from mmonaghan777
This is so true. The last stanza says it all. People need to listen to these words and use them daily. Well written. I am glad you mentioned the importance of prayer.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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This is so true. The last stanza says it all. People need to listen to these words and use them daily. Well written. I am glad you mentioned the importance of prayer.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging words, they mean so much to me.
With much appreciation, Gb
Comment from pome lover
very good poem and good point.
Your message is certainly worth remembering during the chaos surrounding us from the political climate in my country. Our good President is trying to do good things, but is absolutely shooting himself in the foot with his tweets. We can't turn on the news at any time of the day or night when there aren't demonstrations, biased coverage by the media, total disarray, people screaming for his impeachment. Makes me so angry and sad.
Your poem gave me pause. I can't do anything about what's going on, so I should just turn it off and be thankful for my blessings and get on with my life.
Thank you for a calm, practical thought. well expressed and well done!
Also, the picture is perfect.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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very good poem and good point.
Your message is certainly worth remembering during the chaos surrounding us from the political climate in my country. Our good President is trying to do good things, but is absolutely shooting himself in the foot with his tweets. We can't turn on the news at any time of the day or night when there aren't demonstrations, biased coverage by the media, total disarray, people screaming for his impeachment. Makes me so angry and sad.
Your poem gave me pause. I can't do anything about what's going on, so I should just turn it off and be thankful for my blessings and get on with my life.
Thank you for a calm, practical thought. well expressed and well done!
Also, the picture is perfect.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging words, they mean so much to me. Yes, I follow the news every day and every moment of the day I pray for the World leaders for supernatural guidance in this troubles times we live in. Best to trust in God for our lives.
With much appreciation, Gb