A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Away With Me"Assorted poems of love
21 total reviews
Comment from mfowler
Yes, this is very nice, very romantic. The bookended verses beginning 'come away with me my love', allow you to expand your feelings and the desire of the invitation, framed in a good poetic repetition. I liked the emphatic 'this I vow' in verse 2. Made me believe. Dancing in the rain and drinking champagne is a great romance element and fits well here. The rhyming and phrasing give the poem a simple, purposeful rhythm that fit the style of this genre. Overall, it works on many levels and is a good write.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Yes, this is very nice, very romantic. The bookended verses beginning 'come away with me my love', allow you to expand your feelings and the desire of the invitation, framed in a good poetic repetition. I liked the emphatic 'this I vow' in verse 2. Made me believe. Dancing in the rain and drinking champagne is a great romance element and fits well here. The rhyming and phrasing give the poem a simple, purposeful rhythm that fit the style of this genre. Overall, it works on many levels and is a good write.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Very Big smile here now!!!
Thanks so much, Mark.
Always,
Missy
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
I think this another of your most romantic works..You are making me jealous lol
Do think if this was centered it would be easier on the eyes..The lines that are long would not seem that way..Just a thought from someone who cares about not only how you write but the person that is you as well..
Hugs
TK
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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I think this another of your most romantic works..You are making me jealous lol
Do think if this was centered it would be easier on the eyes..The lines that are long would not seem that way..Just a thought from someone who cares about not only how you write but the person that is you as well..
Hugs
TK
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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I went with your suggestions TK. Thank you for a lovely review, sweetie. Your title is safe :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from poetadeu
Your rhyming couplets work well in this
passionate love poem as you give assurance
that this is an eternal vow you make and not
an overnight fling. I love the art and
black/red contrast font. Music I did not share.
French would be wasted on me. I am sure it
is lovely.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Your rhyming couplets work well in this
passionate love poem as you give assurance
that this is an eternal vow you make and not
an overnight fling. I love the art and
black/red contrast font. Music I did not share.
French would be wasted on me. I am sure it
is lovely.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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The music is English Poetadeu...:) Your review is music enough for me. Thank you so very much!
Always,
Missy
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Well, I will listen tomorrow.
Thank you for letting me know.
It was a pleasure to read, LOL:}Joyce
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Well, I will listen tomorrow.
Thank you for letting me know.
It was a pleasure to read, LOL:}Joyce
Comment from l.raven
HI Missy, what a wonderful love poem...come away with me my love...hummmmm...every word beautiful....I love your poem...and the picture stunning...so very well written...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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HI Missy, what a wonderful love poem...come away with me my love...hummmmm...every word beautiful....I love your poem...and the picture stunning...so very well written...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thank you bunches, Linda!!! I have been so busy getting a place ready for a homeless friend that I have had very little time to write and review. He is settled now, so I should be able to catch up:)
Always,
Missy
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not to worry...that is a wonderful thing you are doing...God Bless you...and you are so welcome bunches...luff xxoo
Comment from rspoet
A love for several lifetimes
all wrapped up in one
romantic poem
that rhymes very well
and has good meter
A poem that dances in the rain
and tastes just like champagne
Superb art work to compliment the romance
A font of rose red
Well done
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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A love for several lifetimes
all wrapped up in one
romantic poem
that rhymes very well
and has good meter
A poem that dances in the rain
and tastes just like champagne
Superb art work to compliment the romance
A font of rose red
Well done
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Blessings Rspoet for the delightful review :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from G.B. Smith
OH Missy, if only
Your poem is so beautiful and compelling
I love the artwork and the red font as well
I'll get through this hard time because of their faith, hope, prayers and love of so many. I once wrote a poem "My life is a garden. Somehow it seems so much bigger now.
Thank you Missy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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OH Missy, if only
Your poem is so beautiful and compelling
I love the artwork and the red font as well
I'll get through this hard time because of their faith, hope, prayers and love of so many. I once wrote a poem "My life is a garden. Somehow it seems so much bigger now.
Thank you Missy
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Bear, Bear, Bear. Thank you ever so much for the lovely bling. Please take care of yourself. I will be praying for you xx
Always,
Missy
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friends may come and friends may go, and friends will peter out, but we'll stay friends, peter in or peter out...............
Comment from AnnieDawn
I liked your poem and thought how much of a romantic you must be. The colors you chose go so well with the picture and do compliment your poem well. I hope you continue to write and to compete. I don't see where this is in a contest.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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I liked your poem and thought how much of a romantic you must be. The colors you chose go so well with the picture and do compliment your poem well. I hope you continue to write and to compete. I don't see where this is in a contest.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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No Annie, I did not write this for a competition. Simply for pleasure. I am delighted you found it and liked it enough to leave this fine review. :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Nosha17
Very romantic poem with a message full of feeling for a lover. Excellent rhyming and imagery. I know the song in the video, I am just not too fond of her voice. I prefer the sitar music of her sister-Ravi Shankar's daughter. Enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Very romantic poem with a message full of feeling for a lover. Excellent rhyming and imagery. I know the song in the video, I am just not too fond of her voice. I prefer the sitar music of her sister-Ravi Shankar's daughter. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thank you Faye. I love her other song...Turn me on. The bluesiness of it is what appeals to me. Your review is wonderful to me...thank you!!
Always,
Missy
Comment from Jacob Collins
This was nicely written, justafan. I thought that your writing was well written and flowed well. I also liked the imagery you created, particularly in the thought of flying away with someone. I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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This was nicely written, justafan. I thought that your writing was well written and flowed well. I also liked the imagery you created, particularly in the thought of flying away with someone. I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Hello, Jacob. Thank you, for the lovely review :) I will certainly return the favor.
Always,
Missy
Comment from kiwijenny
What a delightful poem of love and dreams and entwined passion..beautiful
Lyrical ..I like the black and red for the font...passionate
Understated ..I like that too
God bless
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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What a delightful poem of love and dreams and entwined passion..beautiful
Lyrical ..I like the black and red for the font...passionate
Understated ..I like that too
God bless
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Smiling, thank you KJ, for the sweet review :)
I am thrilled you found this to your liking.
Always,
Missy