The Comeback
150 word story16 total reviews
Comment from nordicgirl
This would stand as a perfect and entertaining well crafted story. However, you have ended it on a note of genius. First, the amusing surprise of Shaq and Elvis. THEN the briliant touch of Andy Kaufman as Elvis. Those of us that "get it" rise to applaud!!
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This would stand as a perfect and entertaining well crafted story. However, you have ended it on a note of genius. First, the amusing surprise of Shaq and Elvis. THEN the briliant touch of Andy Kaufman as Elvis. Those of us that "get it" rise to applaud!!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
Comment from dmt1967
I didn't get this one. The smell of vinegar and the reference to Elvis? It was alright as a story goes though. I didn't jump out of my chair though. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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I didn't get this one. The smell of vinegar and the reference to Elvis? It was alright as a story goes though. I didn't jump out of my chair though. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, A brilliant fun take on the Elvis lives story I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
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Hi Mystery author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, A brilliant fun take on the Elvis lives story I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
Comment from Domino 2
A very polished and smooth write.
I'm not sure a tough cop would use the words, 'what in the world', but maybe he's posher than the average. :-)
I don't 'get' the zany surprise ending, but who cares, as it's inventive and fun.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
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A very polished and smooth write.
I'm not sure a tough cop would use the words, 'what in the world', but maybe he's posher than the average. :-)
I don't 'get' the zany surprise ending, but who cares, as it's inventive and fun.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
Comment from Jackreese
A bomb carrying Elvis and a Rookie Shaq, who knew. I think you did a great job with only having a 150 words or less to work with you were able to tell a clear concise story.
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A bomb carrying Elvis and a Rookie Shaq, who knew. I think you did a great job with only having a 150 words or less to work with you were able to tell a clear concise story.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is probably the most well written of any entry that I have read so far. Nice little Elvis twist:) Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
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This is probably the most well written of any entry that I have read so far. Nice little Elvis twist:) Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2015