Short Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Finding Freedom"A Collection Of Short Form Poetry
29 total reviews
Comment from RahulChadha
Really creative, nice animation as well. Beautifullly written and it drew my emotions tremendously. I recommend to use more words, overall its good and desreves to win.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Really creative, nice animation as well. Beautifullly written and it drew my emotions tremendously. I recommend to use more words, overall its good and desreves to win.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thank you so much. I'm so pleased with your response. Wow. That's what I write for. Sorry for the late response. mikey
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh wow and very well done.
Hidden meaning and yet well spoken in such a short piece.
Rules followed for the contest entry. Very well voiced.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Oh wow and very well done.
Hidden meaning and yet well spoken in such a short piece.
Rules followed for the contest entry. Very well voiced.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed. mikey
Comment from Linda Engel
Nicely stated. If you love it , let it go. It will eventually come back to the ground.
You an also look at the kite as being your troubles and worries tied to your wrist. Letting the kite go releases your woes. well done, Mike.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Nicely stated. If you love it , let it go. It will eventually come back to the ground.
You an also look at the kite as being your troubles and worries tied to your wrist. Letting the kite go releases your woes. well done, Mike.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Wow. I AM behind. Thank you so much. I'm so pleased you liked this. mikey
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo that complements your tiny poem perfectly. A worthy and original entry for the Lune contest: how to get freedom. Lovely layout as well. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Excellent photo that complements your tiny poem perfectly. A worthy and original entry for the Lune contest: how to get freedom. Lovely layout as well. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Thank you so much. Well, as you can see, I'm a little behind!!
Thanks for the best wishes, they worked!! mikey
Comment from justafan
Great idea!!! I always loved flying kites as a child. So I bet if you tried letting go of all your worries with the simple release of a kite string, it might work, if only for a lil while. :)
Great idea Mikey. oops I said that again. Well it deserved to be said again :)
Always,
Missy
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Great idea!!! I always loved flying kites as a child. So I bet if you tried letting go of all your worries with the simple release of a kite string, it might work, if only for a lil while. :)
Great idea Mikey. oops I said that again. Well it deserved to be said again :)
Always,
Missy
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Hi. I'm like the marathon runner who's running in traffic after everyone's gone home. This is only two weeks late. I just wanted to wait until I WON THE CONTEST!!!
You were right. Thank you so much. mikey
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Hip Hip Hooray!!!!
Comment from Zinnia48
Nice reframe of the old adage about needing to release those we love so that they can return freely. The space before "releasing" is a kind of releasing by itself. thanks for crafting this original spin on freedom. caroline
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Nice reframe of the old adage about needing to release those we love so that they can return freely. The space before "releasing" is a kind of releasing by itself. thanks for crafting this original spin on freedom. caroline
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Hi. So sorry to be this far behind. I do appreciate and read all my reviews. I'm delighted you enjoyed this. OMG! It won the contest. Thanks so much. mikey
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Congrats! You deserve it! Caroline
Comment from Sasha
This is as lovely lune and a great entry for this contest. I know you are busy, but you haven't read anything of mine in months. Although there is no obligation to read a reviewers posts, I must admit I feel a bit slighted by not hearing from you.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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This is as lovely lune and a great entry for this contest. I know you are busy, but you haven't read anything of mine in months. Although there is no obligation to read a reviewers posts, I must admit I feel a bit slighted by not hearing from you.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Hi. Yeah, I just looked and I've only been reviewing about one or two a month. I do read almost every one. I read your recent one and am planning to review it. I'm trying not to post anything and I think I'll just have to really stick to that. I still write, but it isn't right to post and not participate. I was hoping to enter a couple contests and keep a low profile, but it isn't working out. I didn't mean to slight you and I'm sorry for making you feel that way. Maybe I'll have more time in the future. In the meantime, your book is amazing. It reads with so much more power as a book than it does in pieces. It was a compelling read that I couldn't put down. Very emotional, but never in the wrong way. Always honest and in a way that would help and illuminate. mikey
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Thanks for responding. I just wasn't sure if I had offended you. NOt to worry. I am not angry.
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, there is a lot of truth in your poem...as a child when flying a kite was one of the most relaxing things I did...I used to love that...wish I could fly...feel free...a great poem you...well done...good luck sweetie...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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HI Michael, there is a lot of truth in your poem...as a child when flying a kite was one of the most relaxing things I did...I used to love that...wish I could fly...feel free...a great poem you...well done...good luck sweetie...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Hi. Catching up ... kind of. So pleased you liked this. mikey
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my catching up is when I try to review every message...it gets to be so many...you can't do them all...I've tried...so good to see you Michael...and I love your writes...always have...have a wonderful evening....Liff xxoo
Comment from Nosha17
I like the metaphor, flying a kite is a way of letting go, especially if you do let go. Well chosen words and message, good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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I like the metaphor, flying a kite is a way of letting go, especially if you do let go. Well chosen words and message, good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Thank you so much. Your luck did the trick. I won!! mikey
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Congrats, you are an excellent writer, no reason not to win. Faye
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh this was really good. and i like how you put space before the word "releasing" and put it in italics, too.
excellent entry! thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :-)
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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ooh this was really good. and i like how you put space before the word "releasing" and put it in italics, too.
excellent entry! thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :-)
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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I'm not too far behind am I?
So pleased you enjoyed. Thank you, mikey