Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Good ending! That'll teach him for stalking Alice. She's a survivor, that one. An axe, no less. I hope it wasn't just the mailman. LOL! :)

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015

Thank you, Phyllis. I hope you are enjoying the weekend, my friend~Debbie

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

You got me again, clever lady. It's lucky the ax was nearby. The telling was so vivid. I felt like I was right there with her.

- They [jz]tackled cutting down a whole
-Today, was the first snow. She walked in the woods alone [today](repetition), memories of her father in the forefront of her mind.
-Alice felt as though there (was) someone following


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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015

Thanks, Ellen. You are the only one who caught the repetition. Have a good night, my friend~Debbie